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| tcl7189 2008-05-16 ch 1, | abuseNice start...looking forward to the rest! |
| CrecentMoon 2008-05-06 ch 2, | abusePLEASE, update soon! This is REALLY starting to get interesting!! |
| Onhiro 2008-05-05 ch 2, | abuseHoly crap! Sou just pounded that guy! If only the idiot had listened...anyway, I look forward to the next chapter, though I hope that the wait won't be as long. KEEP ON WRITING! |
| skenshingumi 2008-05-03 ch 2, | abuseJust when we are all pumped up for Kenshin and Kaoru to meet, you tilt toward Misao and Soujiro. I am trying like mad to think who they were in Kenshin's dream but I guess I will just wait to find out. Obviously, the sight of Kenshin didn't sit so well with Soujiro. Why did he feel he would need to ask Kaoru later rather than Misao? What is the connection between Misao and Soujiro besides being twins, and why do they parents frown on magic? Questions, questions, questions…I am intrigued. By the way I like the little throw-aways, like the way Soujiro knows Misao is going to take a second look while in the boys' locker room. Her high energy and curiosity shine through once again. |
| sulou 2008-05-01 ch 2, | abuseI think at first when I read this chapter I was a bit disappointed because there was nothing about Kenshin or Kaoru. I thought your first chapter was so incredible (especially Kenshin's dream), I was sort of expecting more of the same. So I ended up not reviewing. (Shame on me for being so narrow minded . . . ) Today I decided to read this chapter again and leave a review, because it does deserve one. Now I am curious about this magical connection between Soujiro and Misao. Obviously there will be much more to this story than Kenshin finding his reincarnated lost love. I am so looking forward to this. |
| rem 2008-04-29 ch 2, anon. | abuseupdate please |
| Seelenspiel 2008-04-28 ch 2, | abuseoh an update! :D |
| flaming-amber 2008-04-28 ch 2, | abuseHm... The first chapter was a nice narrative regarding some obscure and obvious dark and bloody past, in which Kenshin served his lady --> whom I can only assume to be Kaoru, right? The second chapter was a bit of a throw off because I was expecting a Kaoru appearance in the very least... The Soujiro-Misao sibling-ship is a little bit weird but the fact that they get teased about it is... understandable in this context... So even though there is it the HINT of incest... well, I guess to some degree its still acceptable... Anyhow, I'm a little anxious to see Kenshin get to see his lady again so I'll just have to wait for the next chapter... |
| Tart 2008-03-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseMORE CAGED PLEASE!1 |
| Kiki 2007-10-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseAis! Omg I really love your story. I love the way that u can make even the most mundane of activities (getting ready for sch) be infused with delectable snippets of info that leaves the reader wanting for more. Kenshin's memory of the past also flows through smoothly and does not feel like something thrown in just for the heck of it. Please continue this story as soon as possible but don't neglect the rest that are equally good as well. Cheers to your hopefully continued interest in mesmerizing your readers. ~kiki |
| shi hime 2007-09-01 ch 1, | abuseI am very interested to what will happen in this story...it's very intriguing... I am also very excited to read the next chapter so could you please update this soon...hehe... I REALLY AM MYSTIFIED WITH THIS...and this is AWESOME...so please please update soon...XD |
| kara 2007-07-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseI could not look away through this entire first chapter. It has such a mystical feel to it. I can't wait to see what happens so please update! |
| sapphireracoongal 2007-06-11 ch 1, | abuseA great start to a seemingly awesome story!! Update soon k!! =) |
| Isis 01 2007-05-29 ch 1, | abuseWow. Really good first chapter. I suppose Kaoru is our mysterious Lady? I liked the alternate universe you set. I hope you'll write more about it in the next installement. Is everyone in this universe capable of magic? Or is it just Kenshin, because he already lived and died before? And what happened to him after he discovered his Lady? This smells like a good romance, if you know what I mean. Update soon! |
| Neko-Lady 2007-05-26 ch 1, | abuseCool story! An excellent beginning, Hiko is abrasive but necessary I suppose if you are painting Kenshin as an adolecent. Hope you have Sano and Misao in the story, after Kenshin and Kaoru, they are my favorites! Cheers! Neko-sama |