 Brukaoru 2009-06-14 . chapter 2Very interesting! Beautifully written. I would love to see this continued sometime! |
 reader713 2008-09-30 . chapter 2So. Will you be updating? (all of your incomplete stories?)? Please say yes. |
 alex 2008-08-17 . chapter 2 update son please? |
 Fickle Luck 2008-07-30 . chapter 2Write another chapter? Please? I can wait! :P |
 tcl7189 2008-05-16 . chapter 1Nice start...looking forward to the rest! |
 CrecentMoon 2008-05-06 . chapter 2PLEASE, update soon! This is REALLY starting to get interesting!! |
 Onhiro 2008-05-05 . chapter 2Holy crap! Sou just pounded that guy! If only the idiot had listened...anyway, I look forward to the next chapter, though I hope that the wait won't be as long.
KEEP ON WRITING! |
 skenshingumi 2008-05-03 . chapter 2Just when we are all pumped up for Kenshin and Kaoru to meet, you tilt toward Misao and Soujiro. I am trying like mad to think who they were in Kenshin's dream but I guess I will just wait to find out. Obviously, the sight of Kenshin didn't sit so well with Soujiro. Why did he feel he would need to ask Kaoru later rather than Misao? What is the connection between Misao and Soujiro besides being twins, and why do they parents frown on magic? Questions, questions, questions…I am intrigued.
By the way I like the little throw-aways, like the way Soujiro knows Misao is going to take a second look while in the boys' locker room. Her high energy and curiosity shine through once again. |
 sulou 2008-05-01 . chapter 2I think at first when I read this chapter I was a bit disappointed because there was nothing about Kenshin or Kaoru. I thought your first chapter was so incredible (especially Kenshin's dream), I was sort of expecting more of the same. So I ended up not reviewing. (Shame on me for being so narrow minded . . . )
Today I decided to read this chapter again and leave a review, because it does deserve one. Now I am curious about this magical connection between Soujiro and Misao. Obviously there will be much more to this story than Kenshin finding his reincarnated lost love. I am so looking forward to this. |
 rem 2008-04-29 . chapter 2 update please |
 Seelenspiel 2008-04-28 . chapter 2oh an update! :D |
 flaming-amber 2008-04-28 . chapter 2Hm... The first chapter was a nice narrative regarding some obscure and obvious dark and bloody past, in which Kenshin served his lady --> whom I can only assume to be Kaoru, right? The second chapter was a bit of a throw off because I was expecting a Kaoru appearance in the very least... The Soujiro-Misao sibling-ship is a little bit weird but the fact that they get teased about it is... understandable in this context...
So even though there is it the HINT of incest... well, I guess to some degree its still acceptable...
Anyhow, I'm a little anxious to see Kenshin get to see his lady again so I'll just have to wait for the next chapter... |
 Tart 2008-03-28 . chapter 1 MORE CAGED PLEASE!1 |
 Kiki 2007-10-03 . chapter 1 Ais! Omg I really love your story. I love the way that u can make even the most mundane of activities (getting ready for sch) be infused with delectable snippets of info that leaves the reader wanting for more. Kenshin's memory of the past also flows through smoothly and does not feel like something thrown in just for the heck of it.
Please continue this story as soon as possible but don't neglect the rest that are equally good as well. Cheers to your hopefully continued interest in mesmerizing your readers.
~kiki |
 shi hime 2007-09-01 . chapter 1I am very interested to what will happen in this story...it's very intriguing... I am also very excited to read the next chapter so could you please update this soon...hehe... I REALLY AM MYSTIFIED WITH THIS...and this is AWESOME...so please please update soon...XD |