Reviews for Operation: Disbelief

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IceWolfQueen 2007-08-15 ch 1,	abuseFrom Spiky to Not Spiky, Smirky to Flippy. Wow, they have the most unique naming sense... ^^; Oh what fun, Niou blushing. Seems like everyone had fun. Ehem, well, maybe... ~Wolf
theProdigiesz 2007-07-27 ch 1,	abuseoh I love this A LOT! heehe, especially the goldfish thing! How very cute of Akaya!
Roaming Phantom 2007-05-21 ch 1,	abuse“Excuse me?” Marui drew himself up to his full height (he was only just about the same height as the cyclist). “Are you threatening my boyfriend?” That's my favorite part.. Well, I hope for the next Myth Pair, Chotarou will choose the place and it will be the Church. (I don;t know if the Priest will start to sprinkle the Holly water to Niou... And... guest by yourselves) Thanks for updating!! XD
endlessly 2007-05-15 ch 1,	abusewonderful fluff. Liked everything. And you made Niou blush..I howled when I read that. And Marui being so protective of Akaya...the sweetness will never end ^^ floating in the sky You've topped yourself with this one. Congrats :)
EiKiTouYuIchiMaSyuke Angel 2007-05-14 ch 1,	abuseNya! that was totally cute! I love that fact that Marui was going to protect Akaya from that mean cyclist! Niou and Choutarou together was okay... but I wanted Niou to be with Shishidoh... oh well anything goes anyways... ^_^ great work! and oh... hope next time you can type my pen name with just looking at it once... kidding! hehe
blufox 2007-05-14 ch 1,	abuseHAHHAHAHA! Marui's such a sweet boyfriend, really. :) And I love the whole interaction! I was so happy to receive an author alert. Been missing Maruihara lovin' and stuff. (Although I have to admit that I have been in Oshigaku tralaland lately as well). All in all, I LOVE YOU. :) Favorite line: Field notes: Targets have won a goldfish from one of the stalls. Agent Kirihara is in a state of distress and I have had to stop him from jumping out and rescuing the goldfish several times. He claims that Spiky will eat it, but after giving him a stern pep talk he has gained his composure and will be able to continue the mission in a professional manner.
Javert 2007-05-14 ch 1, anon.	abuseOkay, what the heck. My computer was just like "I got a virus!" and then it went all "JUST KIDDING I deleted it I just wanted to tell you anyway!" and then it was like "But actually, I got two MORE viruses that I didn't tell you about earlier!" :( Sometimes I worry about my computer. It's got...oh look, I'm being rudely interrupted! ANOTHER VIRUS! ACCH! I give up. Well, anyhow. Thank you very much for writing this, first off. I enjoyed it immensely. Marui (I just got another virus...) is fantastic with names, eh? I like 'Flippy and Smirky'. Gakuto is SO flippy. And thank you for even acknowledging the existence of GENIUS FROM KANSAI, OSHITARI YUUSHI! Or OSHITARI YUUSHI, GENIUS FROM KANSAI! Either works. I call him both. Or...I just call him Oshitari. :) I've drawn like ten pictures of him/John Lennon (doesn't he look like John Lennon!? I went on the John Lennon website and they had a little self portrait he did and it looks like...nay, IS Oshitari) where he's like 'Mr. POOKAAFEISU' like it is on the lyrics for Crafty. That paragraph is too long. I don't like reading long amounts of text. :) I'm just kinda lazy like that. Anyway, even if I don't really care for the pairing (unfortunately I like Yagyuu with Niou and Shishido with Choutarou because I'm canon like that) I enjoy reading it because IT MAKES NIOU SQUIRM. No, that's only part of it, but I think it's an interesting change between gangbanger delinquent 'needs-his-own-warning' Niou and blushing, unsure, vulnerable 'Haru-san. I SWEAR IF MY COMPUTER GETS ANOTHER VIRUS I'M GONNA BREAK SOMETHING. Figuratively, of course; having weighed the probability of that happening I'm not about to do that. Oh, and there it is! Joy! Rapture! re-reads Ohmygoodness, what is this secret love affair between Oshitari and Yukimura?! OH NO! What will Gakuto do? Poor thing! He'll have nothing but his acrobatic flippiness. Okay, this is getting a bit wordy and I have my education to attend to, so I'll wrap it up (like Taco Bell or something.) Favorite phrase: (With all these viruses, I think my computer has started to rudely ignore me and my keystrokes, so I'm not sure how typetastic this will be) Or possibly Not Spiky’s tact. Dear lord, you know the word tact? Don’t do that thing with your eyebrows. You look like a really frightened cod. It's fantastic. I want to be Kirihara when I grow up. ...No, scratch that, I totally do not. No. He's all "I'M BLEEDING!" and he...you know, bleeds. But I like his hair. Were I a guy, I would totally have hair like Kirihara. Well, no, I wouldn't, it's not in my genes, but you get the picture. I'm just trying to get across that I love him, okay? But...no, no, NO, Akaya. Don't put the fish in the stupid bathtub. I've had 11 fish and they all last the shortest time, man. I won one at a banquet once and it jumped out of the tank the first night, so I went and bought two more and got a cover for the tank. It suffocated them! So...uncool. Okay, this is too wordy. Thank you for the story, and good luck on exams!
Ryuu Amethyst 2007-05-14 ch 1,	abuseOMG! I can't stop snickering... and laughing... and giggling and list goes on and on... As you put it, Myth Pair is DEFINITELY one of my fave! ^^ Anyway. Targets engaged in battle with members of Hyoutei Gakuen (high-school division) at 1220 hours. They will henceforth be referred to as Flippy and Smirky. Flippy and Smirky? God! I kept reading that part over and over... I wonder what will become of the 'agents' after this... ponders Anyway, love it, Sandy-sama! ^^
merissala 2007-05-14 ch 1,	abusei'm lazy. so. I love niou x choutarou... when niou is more mean though! :D ~merissala p.s. Did you have another story before this that i didn't review.? I think you do... huh... i'm sleepy. P.p.s. wonderful! p.p.s. I'm so unbelievably sad. Why? I dunno. :D p.p.p.s. lalalalallalallalala~~! OK, i'm done. sorry for such a stupid review.
Mrs Hatake Itachi 2007-05-14 ch 1,	abuseNice, Anyway I think I like to read about some Niou and Shishido as well. Hehe demanding aren't I!
Ria Sakazaki 2007-05-13 ch 1,	abusearggh!1 i like NiouOhtori now!
LiQuYu 2007-05-13 ch 1,	abuselol! Aw... so cute. ^^ Very amusing with the reports by Agent Murai and Agent Kirihara. I'd never think of a Niou/Choutarou pairing but somehow, you made it work. ^^ Favourite quote: "Spiky appeared to get very annoyed with a tree (highly recommend a Talk With Mura to be prescribed later) and attacked it and then himself. Not Spiky intervened and grabbed his wrists and said something about the petals looking nice and not to hurt himself getting them out. Note that at this point they were standing face to face. A tension filled moment ensued. And then ‘Haru freaking blushed. I mean Spiky, sorry. But honest to Buddha, he went red and pulled away, muttering that he’d stop. And then they continued walking." Keep writing. I wanna know if Niou and Choutarou last~~`*
Kawaii-Gaara-Chan 2007-05-13 ch 1,	abuseMou, even though I don't reall ylike this pairing, the story was highly amusing. I wonder what each of their positions in the Rikkai agency is. That was cute when Marui defended Akaya, hmm. Love your fics, can't wait till the next one!
xquisittexabie 2007-05-13 ch 1,	abuseLOL!! I was laughin like nuts for dis one. I luved the agent talk and cherry blossom scenes the most. Damn straight gotta luv tht part! Write a sequel for the Finally Understood one soon. I wana see more talkin golf clubs soon XP!
Sleeping Rain 2007-05-13 ch 1,	abuseDude. I love this pairing. I don't know how you did it, but it works. Wow. Ah, it's so cute. I can't wait for the next part. “Stop putting flowers in my hair!” Niou finally yelled, giving a cherry blossom tree a passing kick. That only succeeded in a fresh load of petals raining down and getting caught in Niou’s hair, and he brushed violently at them in frustration." That was probably my favorite part. Although the part where Niou caught up to Kirihara and Marui was pretty funny too. The entire story was really good.

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