Why the end had to be sad ):? Anyway, it was great and I like how you write :)

ok, it was awesome and happy and cute and good like and then you went and did the sirius dying bit and eh, I dont think it flows quite well with the previous happy stuff. on a higher note, it was good.

AW! Did you have to make it depressing at the end? Sorry it was really good! but the end made me sad!

loved the story, hated the ending...don't get me wrong, it's written great, but it reminded me, that Siri is dead... :'(
anyways, great story

ah... dud y da hell did u hav 2 rite da last paragraph?
now i'm all depressed!
but it was really sweet though

That was wonderful! It made me laugh out loud. Oh, by the way, I read a fanfiction in which Sirius named the giant squid 'Marlene.' :)

Ooh cute & funny! :) great job!
- Gaby

You manage to make even humour bittersweet! I'm amazed. Really sweet though, and sad.

i liked it, and it would be kinda funny for someone to be afraid of apples

Through out this story I smiled and giggled.
Then in the last lines the simplistic words of death and love and untruths of fairytales is heartbraking.
I did not expect it, and I feel a pain in my chest and tears in my eyes.

I am falling head over heels for the way in which you write, it is a mixture of angst, romance and comedy, a combination which fits with me so perfectly that all of your stories are like little packages of chocolate - sirius flavoured chocolate that is!! This fic is exceptional.

Loved it!
The poison apple thing was very creative.
The ending was sad.
:(
Still awesome though!

I LOVE the ending...
:)
Read and review mine, please?

*hands author an unpoisoned apple*

Brilliant, absolutely brilliant!

Cuba

that is so depressing!
*sobs*

oh crap! ive goten addicted to remus and sirius love and now since the book said he died its all GLOOMY!

*sobs*

great story
seriously sad (i get teary very easily)
why oh why did sirius die! dammit!