Aww, this was really good. =) I'm amazed by how you managed to take an iffy (considering the characters) scenario and write it in such a believable and in character way. I was really impressed by how you portrayed Jade. Most of the time, people lose his characterization while trying to write him as a bit softer, and you didn't.

Hi hi! This is ashi, a fellow Jade/Dist fan, reviewing your fic. I just have to say it's very well in character and wonderfully written (which are both hard to pull off in my opinion especially with these two characters). It's so rare to encounter such a thing... so I commend you for both writing and sharing it! I enjoyed reading it. Thank you~ 8D

So pretty!
You described things nicely and kept them in character... Jade is not always an evil snarky bitch, and I like that you portrayed his softer side.
:D