brilliant story! Please update soon!
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More please? It's so good!

You are positively wonderful writer, creative too X3 I love it!

loved it. update some time?

I can't believe I haven't reviewed this story yet...Or maybe I have and I just forgot.

But still! I LOVE this alternate universe!
And I have to say that I read the prologue alone maybe eight times just now, it was so good! (Imagine how long it took me to get through all seven acts like this.)

Also this is maybe the fifth time I've read The Book of Truth. Your fanfictions are always so addicting.

I do have one problem though:
"The kitchen wasn’t as crowded, and was blessedly free of females." Roy is a freaking womanizer; he should have no issues with a surplus of ladies.

I loved Roy's drunk paragraph - "not in a straight line, mind you, but the intent was there." Pure win!
And also the look Al gives Ed - okay, all of Act Seven is notable.

I could go on forever.

This is a very interesting story, it's very good.
Have you given up writing this story? If so that's a shame because I would very much like to see more of it.

Wow! Awesome. I have to say, I really enjoy all of your stories. They're wonderfully written... and refreshingly original. Keep up the great work!

(Don't forget to update!)

I love how people are reading more into their book than there actually is.

You have great skills at writing. I think you are my favorite FF author!

Aww... Poor Ed. I wonder how him becoming an author will change things.

I really like the premise. It's a interesting and different AU concept. You kept the tragedy that made Ed and Al who they are, but managed to dodge the angst so prevalent in FMA fic. (I've nothing against a little emotional trauma in fic, but the constant misery a lot of authors go for is just completely unappealing.)

That's probably one of the first AU I enjoyed. That sounds pretty interesting until now and I'm eager to see what will happen next. Will you update soon ?
Hope so.

Wow I've not seen this take on FMA but I'm thoroughly enjoying it. Especially with the young boys writing a book that has so many people in a twitter and I love the fact that you've given Gracia something to do for herself.

A wonderful AU, love how you've characterised Roy and the rest of the sub-main characters. The running conversation between Ed and AL keeps the pace up- not to mention how cute you make them sound. ^_^

How close will this story keep to the future canon and will Sloth return from the Gate like Wrath did? Oh, the tension! Can't wait for the update!

Great story so far.

This is the 3rd of your fic that I've read, and loved!, and the 3rd of your fics that have only 4 or 5 chapters. I hope you I've really loved all of the fics of yours I've read so far, but this seems to be a depressing theme. Here's hoping I find a completed fic or two down farther on your profile!