Well. like you said, I had a bad feeling about what Satoru will go through. But you already have an idea what everyone will manage to help him, don't you?

anyway, I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter.
please update soon.

A good fiction. a bit shy in the writings in the bed=ginning, but really good.

characters are well-respected. I think.

Allen dos know about the Fourteenth ?
where is Cross ?
when will you update ?

lol! ahahhahaha, the joke at the end, it made me cry a little!

do you beta this yourself? cause i've only counted like four mistakes out of alot of chappies so far xp

RAWR. i thought you said it was gonna be rated t :3.. luv it more rated m

too lazy to sign in.. lol, good story, ill favourite it later

Very good story, I hope you update soon. :]
Although, I'm not quite sure about the way Allen is acting. After everything he's been through (being violated by Kanda and then the whole Noah ordeal) I think he would still be shaken up about it. No matter how strong he is he's still human, and personally, I think he would still be very emotionally scarred.

Anyways, I hope you update soon. This is such a awesome story! :D

Haha, this is so similar to your Quizilla KandaOC story. But it's better, cause it's yaoi. XD
Please keep up the great work!

i REALLY wanna know what happens next DX
will there be a time in your story wherein allen will become a noah?
that'll be really cool xD
plz update son!

=O i managed to read this story in one day.. i feel so proud of myself... o.O

1. how could you torture poor allen like that?? THATS HORRIFIC D= *bursts into tears* T_T

2. this story is still awesome =O (even with the torturing of allen) please update it =)

Why aren't you updating!? This is such a great story!! If you are dropping it you could at least put up a memo or something D:

OH NOES! U ABANDONED THE STORY!
y r u on hiatus, thre are lots of ways to make this work!

okay so just saying that this chapter was a good one an that includes the rest of the story so... yeah can't wait for your next chapter and love your stories.

wow. this is an amazing story. it's really long but an easy read at the same time. more please!

<3 you for even writing this. I think it's all so awesome and smooth. I noticed, though, that for some reason Satoru always makes me think of Sasuke. I love the fic, but I wanted to know if Sasuke-kun was your inspiration for Sat-chan?