I realise you wrote this story in 2007, but I had to review it! I just love the way you write, there's something very unique about it that just draws you in and makes the story so believable. Also, there are a lot of lines that made me laugh, especially the one about 'some lunatics God's playground'.

Am I getting a Dead Rising vibe here, what with the shopping mall in Colorado? Or is it just me?

Great story, either way. Gotta love zombies.


Anna

Very nice work there. I do hope you continue. It has the makings of a great story. Let me know when you update again.

This has the makings of a rather good story.
Oddly enough, reminds me of the zombie minigame level in MGS3
Keep going? Please?