I wanted to say that I liked your take on Kara's feelings for Zak and Lee. It makes me sick how so many writers have to tear down and invalidate her feelings for Zak and act like she always loved Lee for her to love him now. "I met the wrong brother first." I never thought that was fair to any of the characters. This was was a nice take on Kara's psychology without overdoing it. Thanks and keep writing her just like this.

That was wonderful! Amazing! Superb! I loved it.

It just tore at the soul - that Kara was such a different person with Zak, one that she liked being, and still wondered about now that the chance for being that person was gone.

beautiful! Have you considered more? Having Lee or the Old Man find her and talk to her about what the wedding and her life with Zak would have been would be interesting as well.

This was lovely. I really enjoyed it. :) Thank you.