i <3 totally spies! this is an awesome story

Grammar issues all over the place. Every time someone new talks, you make a new paragraph. You also switch tense from time to time. Other than that, everything's fine. Is this Resident Evil or something?

ah sry I see Leon is in :) .. it's gonna be a wild ride

WOW .. more RE4 goodness (IMHO RE4 is the best game in at least the last 5-6 years) .. and with TS too ..u totally gotta update :)

PS Leon gonna be in this ? fav RE character

Great update! I can't wait for the next!
But what's up with the villagers? It's starting to remind me of Resident Evil meets Silent Hill...

Great chappy! ^_^ Couple typos here and there, though. Update soonish! :-D