That was amazing, slightly twisted, but truly awesome..

I am completely. blown. away. I don't know how else to put it. I want to see this. I want to see this show!

Wow. this story is something very different that what I have read. I love it. just brilliant.

Okay, see, now that? That was just freaking awesome! I loved it. You wrote brilliantly (beautifully) with the twisted (convoluted) relationships and meetings.

I loved it. The way she would see a diamond glint on her finger, the way she John hugged (and cried with) her. It was just absolutely brilliant.

And your ending? Absolutely gorgeous.

I love it.

this is fantastic. your writing is just riveting. any plans to sequel? or just another dean/jess?

I can't even begin to tell you how much I adore this story. First off, it's so well done and in character. I always wondered what would've happened if Sam had actually perished instead of Jess and this is a perfect description. I'd rather have this, than some apple pie 'Jess survives and gets on with her life' thing.

That was really good. I liked the format how you told it through her thoughts and not conversations or anything like that. Excellent job.

Oh, oh, oh. Beautiful and sad. Such a bittersweet little story.

I liked it!! Alot!

That was really sad. Poor Jessica and Dean

beautiful story

Wow. I don't know what I was expecting but not that. Superb story. I especially liked the way she whispered violence in Dean's ear and that she shot John (so believable). Excellent.

Wow. This awesome. It's powerful and passionate. It's dark and twisted. It's deep. Meaningful. It's really well written. As much as the thought of a dead Sam makes me want to scream, I really liked this tale. First and foremost, it's a tale about grief, and incredible power that grief has to change us, and wreck us. Jess and Sam were close, and in the regular series grief wrecked Sam. It made him choose a life he hadn't wanted. It destroyed his normal, his happily ever after. It's nice to see the tables turned. And Dean, here, Dean is connecting with the last connection he has to Sam. Dean can't let go. Jess can't let go. It's dark, but beautiful.

Excellent work.

-Tathariel-