-laughs heartedly- This was VERY good! XD

i am currently rotflmfao. i cant stop laughing. its an amazing story. but so fucking funny!

Okay so this is the first EVER KH fanfiction I've read. I've been into the fanart for a while which led to reading the mangas and attempting and failing to play the games and tonight I gave in and looked up the adorableness that is Roxas/Axel.
I loved it very cute indeed. Poor Demy though.

Ahahhaha, aww, I lol'd at this, and ur right, the sex WAS cute. My friend has Axel's problem, she can't decide wether Roxas makes a better uke or seme. XD I'm totally sending this to her, thanks so much for the awesome read!

omg cha!! when i saw that - the song started playing in my head. LAWL. haha, this was awesome! perfect little uke or not XD.

I. Loved. This!

GO ROXAS. *hifive*

cc8 yay!
that was cute c8
-clings to page- c: i really really liked it :3
thank you so much for writing it c:

This was really cute (though that's probably not the best word to use for it...). The way its written really flows well. It's dialogue-y with a hint of plot. Your usage of correct spelling and grammar is appreciated, also.

AH-HA XD Roxas on top for the win

"He drove over the speed limit like an angry woman... he caused property damage like an angry woman... oh yeah, like an angry woman."

Nice

Maybe I'm just weird, but I think Roxas being Seme is kinda creepy. ..

Yes, the sex was cute,I love uke-determination conversations though. Great semi dialogue too.

SEME ROXAS WINS. I like the spin on this fic, how Roxas parades about with that uke front. Loved the way you wrote him. Great fic!

That was great! It was hilarious!