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Deucalion02
2009-10-25 . chapter 5
this is most like the most awesome revenge fic for ranma that i have read to date. is there any chance that you can either release a new chapter or tell me who the other two killers are? because if it isnt ryoga will it be the kunos? or maybe the daikokus? hell would it be even gosunkugi?
Crysania Fay
2009-07-10 . chapter 5
NO! I read this like... way back in '07, so I was so thrilled to see that it had been updated fairly recently... I hope that you update it again soon. I love this story.
QundraDraconum
2009-06-14 . chapter 5
nice, almost finished too. Got me wondering who the final man is, Tofu or possibly Taro? Always figured Akane was a lesbian, or possibly Bi, but I never saw Shampoo having anything to do with her. Good story.
Lia Silverclaw
2009-06-05 . chapter 5
Well, you definately managed an angsty chapter, but we still don't know who the last person was, considering how many enemies Ranma has, who knows who it could be. Anyway, you do plan on finishing this right? I'd say it would be easy to finish with just one more chapter, two at the most. Anyway's, hope you update.
hentai18ancilla
2009-01-28 . chapter 5
Even better than the movie, although I don't think he'll be going to hell since it's only retribution. The real wonder will be if he doesn't die after his vengeance.
Cattsith
2009-01-26 . chapter 5
I usually don't like the "dark" stuff. I quite enjoy this, however. I look forward to more installments!
keichan2
2008-11-30 . chapter 5
I'm a bit sad, because not much happened in this chapter...
It didn't bother me too much, because I had to re-read from the start (couldn't remember if Shampoo had been one of them...), so I had my dose of action!

I can't help but feel that Tofu is the last one... He is the only male that could have been angry with her.

Please update soon!
gaul1
2008-11-20 . chapter 5
good chapter, bye
Lerris
2008-11-19 . chapter 5
Well, you have action, angst, and drama, but so far it seems a little lacking in an underlying story. Oh don't get me wrong, the writing looks good, but Ranma's journey since leaving the grave seems a bit like a trip to the store. Make a list, check it twice. Killer 1. Check. Killer 2. Check... It just seems like you could use something more although I'm not quite sure what. Maybe Ranma can get done with revenge and be stuck undead. The only problem there seems to be that you would then need something for Ranma to overcome, and given Ranma is a martial arts based story and its suddenly hard for him to lose any martial arts based battle...

At any rate, good luck with this. I am curious to where this goes..
Nadrek
2008-11-19 . chapter 2
I'm actually very surprised Nabiki didn't mention onryo, the Japanese vengeful spirits. Cologne should have mentioned them as well as the Western crow legends.
Jerry Unipeg
2008-11-19 . chapter 5
GREAT CHAPTER! (*x4) Soon ranma and you can rest.
Jerry Unipeg
2008-11-19 . chapter 4
GREAT CHAPTER! (*x4) Nicely done for Kiima.
Jerry Unipeg
2008-11-19 . chapter 3
GREAT CHAPTER! (*x4) One down. Great flash backs.
Jerry Unipeg
2008-11-19 . chapter 2
GREAT CHAPTER! (*x4) To bad that Ukyo die too fast.
Jerry Unipeg
2008-11-19 . chapter 1
GREAT START! (*x4) Oh boy, Ranma is on the warpath.
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