I've been waiting so long for this and I am definitely *not* disappointed. I love how rich and descriptive this story is and how the story unfolds so deliciously slow and even. There are a lot of great parts in these last two chapters. I can't wait for more!

Your research, as always, is fabulous, as is your re-imagining of the series as a whole. I wish this were a novel I could just pick up and carry away with me. It's pretty obvious that you've got something special planned here.

Very well handled. Definitely looking forward to more.

*rubs hands gleefully*

You know I love this. Can't wait for more!

What an interesting take on the series, I'd love to read what happens next. This is very well-written.

What a great surprising and interesting "what-if", and wonderfully written, like all your work...! I really love the start of this... pleaseupdatesoon!

i'm interested to see where this goes - especially with why mugen and fuu together, because in the series he only agreed to it because it meant killing jin.
i'm quite involved now.
i really like your style of writing - just the right amount of detail.
update soon! (: