Interesting. I loved it -- it was smashing.

Very unique. I'm interested as to where this will go. I
'll be sure to read on!

Cool! I like it! I like it a lot! I love the action scene! As Pichu Star said, you've really got a knack for writing them, I think!

Sheesh... can't believe it took me this long to read and review... sorry...

Anyways, I also can't believe no one else has reviewed this... It's really good. The action scenes, as usual, are excellent. I always love reading your action scenes! Puts a real spin on Pokemon battles without destroying the Pokemon spirit altogether. You're so awesome, little bro.

I'd love to see the story that comes after this, as I bet it will be great. Keep up the amazing work!

-Samantha McPhoenix