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Tri-Emperor of The Twilight
2009-08-19 . chapter 4
Good chapter.
deitarion/SSokolow
2009-08-18 . chapter 4
I generally find Ranma getting forced into being a girl cliché and a waste of a good gender-shifter... but aside from that, you're doing a good job. I don't remember running across anything quite like the "loss of control = fear aura" setup you've used here. and you're obviously not just going for the standard "cascade of irredeemable villains" setup bad fics tend to use.

I look forward to seeing what happens when alternate Setsuna drops in for tea. :P
Tovath
2009-07-23 . chapter 4
good chapter. Glad you are still working on this.
irgendwas
2009-07-21 . chapter 1
looking forward to future chapters
recon12
2009-07-19 . chapter 4
dude i thought you were dead becuase i hadnt seen this in so long i had almost forgot about it. hell i think i have to re read the whole thing to refreash my memerio. ok onto the review first off like the hole setsuna has differnt future selfs and only the most likly can contact her is simple, easy, and logical. others word good. now the whole dark pluto,saturn,mercuy being the only nice ones out of the bunch. well kinda nice. i shrug the shoulds here. ok i guest. i supsoe they do need some sort of silver liner after all so maybe just maybe this 'world' stands a chance to survive. but lets face it unless those three either join them and bring a small army each to add them they are scwred.k also its pretty clear what your saying. hell i thinks its fine but others are just picky so i will tell ya the beging aint smoth well a copal parts aint smoth but well its fine in my eyes. hope ya write next chap soon man. so keep it up. no matter what others say. k
Narsil
2009-07-18 . chapter 4
Sorry to hear about why you haven't updated anything in so long, but very happy to see a new update. I hope things get better for you, and that getting new content out at least makes things feel a little better (and that we get more new content as a result).

For this chapter, I like the hints that the "dark" Setsuna and Hotaru (and maybe Ami) may be turnable - but then, I'm a sucker for a happy ending.
vasilidor
2009-07-18 . chapter 4
hey your doing great keep them coming!
JustinD
2009-07-17 . chapter 4
i like most if not all your work
Princess Asuna
2009-07-17 . chapter 4
Awesome story i cannot wait to read more! I hope you update soon, and i am also hoping to see some akane,soun,genma and nabiki bashing sometime too lol i think they got off way too light when ranma left the tendo dojo
Jerry Unipeg
2009-07-17 . chapter 4
GREAT CHAPTER! (*x4) Looks like Ranma might get some new friends.
Jerry Unipeg
2009-07-17 . chapter 3
GREAT CHAPTER! (*x4) Ami can help Ranma with school.
Jerry Unipeg
2009-07-17 . chapter 2
GREAT CHAPTER! (*x4) I like Kasumi getting her wish.
sh8ad8ow
2009-07-17 . chapter 1
great story hope you update it soon.
sh8ad8ow
2009-07-17 . chapter 4
great story
AshK
2009-07-17 . chapter 4
Very good! Keep up the great work! I look forward to more great updates from you!

Sincerely,
AshK
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