Death threats? Oh, no way. Though I suppose if you want one...

(Brandishes spork)

I"m coming for you!

I like it, thouhg it needs a bit of a better ending. That could, and is, seriously affecting him mentally. Though it's fun for Gojyo and DEFINITELY Hakkai, I don't really think it's very good for Sanzo.

On the other hand, I think there's a reason he sleeps with his gun.

DEATH! DEATH TO YOU! Death to you AND your family

XD Not really. You just said you wanted a death threat, and I do my best to please. I rather enjoyed the story. Keep up the good work, and I might just give you a kuukkii. (cookie)

WOnderful angst! Lets here it for Sanzo abuse!

*Retreats into demented little mind*

this fic was awesome XD its the kind of thing thats yaoilicious without any lemony goodness to it " But I like it a lot, and if you want a death threat, you can have one, cuz you deserve whatever you want for this _ Its well written and i love the plot...although no offense, but Sanzo seems about OOC, and um...Jeep, i think you called him, his name is hakaryuu (i think that's how it's spelled...) at least thats what they call him in the episodes i've seen..anyway, it was awesomeness, and sanzo totally deserves what he got for being a crotchety mean stuck up hoitty toitty monk. GOJYO x HAKKAI FOREVER! _

THE STUPID DRAGON'S NAME IS HAKARU! GET-IT-RIGHT! HAKARU!

wah! DARK FIC! WARN! AH! good anyways... even if you did make hakkai evil...

oh! UPDATEUPDATEUPDATE! please! wow... sanzo was gonna cry! *cheers hakkai and gojyo on* but in a way... i feel sorri for sanzo...

Wtf. O_o;

0.0;; ::stare:: intresting. . . and since you want a death threat so badly: Omae korasu!

...*death threat!*

This is pretty but I never expected hakkai to be a rapist!

YAY, Sanzo abuse! I just love this fic ( adding to favs) you did a great job on it

Since I can only submit one signed review, I'll do this this way. No offense, but just to ask a similar type of question: how can a female write yaoi? Answer: it doesn't really matter if you're married, single, or whatever, all that matters is that you try to write and have fun doing it.

Oh yes. This was... interesting. First I thought that Hakkai and Gojyo just made up a way to make Sanzo more humble *snickers* and I thought it was funny. But then Sanzo nearly cries O_O that's mean. But it gives the story a sweet and dark twist. I would definedley like to see more. *wonders* Please let Sanzo enjoy it... at least a little -_- In some morbid way.

*snicker* Saiyuki Horror Yay yay!

Oh and sorry for being rude but... how on earth does a married man write like this O_O ?

I have seen this stoy before...I think it was at w.saiyukifan.net, or something like that. Was that you? Anyway, I can't remember where I saw it, because saiyukifan.net has closed down...anywho, great story!