in the end if there is any thing for those who deserve it it can only be happiness

Wow, I loved this one. I read the end and I remembered being younger. The I stopped wishing for my parents to get a dog, or for a new bike, or any of the things most kids wish for, when I was... probably ten. After that, when I saw the first star in the sky, I would wish to be taken away. Like Luna was. It never came true. Thanks for reminding me.

Wow. That was yet again, AMAZING. It's somewhat sad to know that the girl they've mourned is not exactly Luna, yet it's still satisfying that she just lives forever in the forest where she "belongs".

Aw, that was so sweet.
I can totally see Luna being raised by fairies,
even though that's not how it happened.

How very beautiful. A wonderful fairytale!

Touching and I know I've read something very similar (the fairy bits at least).

Anyway, nicely done!

Your best Lunafic to date! You've easily surpassed Michelle with this amazing little gem. It's very rare you find such a perfect mix of sadness and optimism regarding the "life after". Absolutely marvellous!
I did have a tiny little problem understanding the title, but I managed...

another great story!

Beautiful, if slightly haunting fic. Great work.

Very poetic, and I can recognise Luna - but you've gone into a faery place where I can't follow.

You write s owonderfully, but very strange :) Another enjoyable one, full of great imagery and magical moments - a true fairy tale.

This is magical. I like your writings, they remind me of J.M. Barrie, who wrote the stories of Peter Pan. You can capture innocence a lot better than most writers. Keep writing.

That was... wow. Beautiful. There really aren't any words to describe the feeling I get when I read your story. It's like time just stops. Thank you for that.

Interesting twist, but it feels a little bit forced. I'm not sure how to describe it, but it seems like it would be more realistic if the actual Luna sacrificed herself but yet lived on among the fairies. Is there a motif you're basing this on that I'm unfamiliar with?

Also, you seem to confuse the words "lose" and "loose".

Sorry if this sounds negative, by the way: I'm used to a brilliant standard from you! ;)