amazing bit of work there..truly amazing.

henred5

shit! you write way too well! that was very good, and you described the emotions and feelings so perfectly that i could feel it! you are truly a wonderful author!

*sniff* beautiful. )

*sigh*, if only they addded this to the movie... this is amazing!

This is probably exactly the ending Square was looking for, but didn't find, because they hadn't thought of it and you hadn't written it. Am I making any sense?

I love the poetic way in which you write. I often do the same when I'm writing a sad angsty piece. I'd love to see more FF:TSW fics from you.

... *_* ... (*sparkle-sparkle*) you express yourself pretty damn well! i cant believe ive been putting your fic off for the past few days. what you're saying are all true, i could just relate somehow. it must be so hard to even think that you save the whole of the planet but you lose the one person so important to you. *sniff* i think id better review the rest... _ keep writing!

Oh my god...this was such an amazing story. I've cried too much today by reading all of these wonderful FF:TSW stories! especially this one - it made me bawl! and it's been a long time since a story has made me cry this hard. you are a superb writer! keep up the wonderful work!

That was incredible! I mean really, really incredible! If it weren't for the copyrights, I'd tell you to get that published! Sure, there were a few spelling mistakes, but they were nothing compared to the feeling behind it. In-frickin'-credible!

The second time today I have read a fanfiction and cried. And normally I don't cry easy. The Dreams Within is truly a beautifuly written masterpiece. I just can't believe how truly wonderful it is. Final Fantasy: The Spirits Within has spawned some truly wonderful fanfictions, and this work of art is at the top of the list. Excellent times infinity! Now I must go find my hankie, Ciao.

Gah, I HATED HATED HATED the ending to that movie. I just sat there, crying in the theater... Yes, crying. And I'm about the most unemotional movegoer you can get. So I'm just sitting there, silently screaming at the screen, 'I need some CLOSURE!' Anyway, great job, that definitely gave me some closure. Nice fic.

wow...i'm speechless. that was awesome. seriously, it was sooo good. not enough words to express it! it was so...descriptive? yeah, think that's it. whew! that was great. i got so absorbed! just readin n readin n readin...i think i gotta reread that poem tho. too many big words for me. haha. well newayz...that was AWESOME!

This is really great... I wish I could write like you do. The bit about the diamond from the mines of sorrow was clever. I've never heard that one before. Anyway, keep writing because you have talent!

I *still* have to see this movie...grr haha. hmm you STILL say you can't write prose? bah, you write in beautifully in your own poetic style... The imagery, the metaphors, which deepen the emotion in the piece,... are just wow. The length is appropriate and the characters are dimensional emotionally and ...in everything. This was like a slow motion take of Aki's emotions while watching her love wither away..and you grasp the whirling emotions within her to the very shred...seriously, you can characterize, and you can write extremely well. You write when you feel you can...that shows that you're pouring your heart..truly your heart, and it shows. The way you write...it holds the value of almost...a once dying art form, seriously. I mean this. The poetry, the internal emotions...they remind me a style of this book I read(a readlly well-written classic book...*bangs head to remember*) Dude, you have sooo much going for you, seriously. If you could write a whole novel like this...it'll be magic. Sincerely, I mean this. I've read very well-written pieces around this site and more, but there's something very similar in the way they convey emotions...you do it in a different, unique way...*claps wildly and jumps up and down*

That was amazing. i am at a loss for words it was that excellent. a beautiful, beautiful peice of work. it made me cry. it's been a while since a fanfiction has done that. Superb.

Wow, that was beautiful. Superbly written, very detailed. I liked it. The ending of the movie didn't offer much in the way of closure, but this certainly cements it. Great job.