OKKAY i'm confused you've been saying helen half of the chapter but you described and started by calling her Ellen Sue Gotlander...

update soon i love this story. There are hardly any of these storys and even less Dottie and Jimmy ones

I do a little happy dance every time I see you've updated. I'm so glad to see that you haven't given up on the story. Please update soon!

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I'm very excited to see that you've written another League of Their Own story. I like how you're writing the story from the start of the movie, to what I assume (and hope dearly), to the end of the movie. I will be eagerly waiting for more upcoming chapters...*hint, hint*

Oh, well this is setting us up for something interesting. I like the plot, dialogue, and characters, all that good stuff. There were a few sentences that seemed a bit clunky (or perhaps I'm just too damn tired, amd shouldn't bother reading anything), but overall there's nothing much to be corrected or expanded upon. You've got all your bases covered, I believe (corny, I know, but that's as good as I can come up with - I should really watch more baseball).

I still haven't watched the movie, so there's a bit I don't understand (bear with me!), but I'm trusting, based (no pun intended- hee hee) on your past fics, that this'll all be perfectly clear soon enough. I love the OC's, and the older Dottie. Can't wait for next chapter.