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| ExtremeWriter 2008-07-15 ch 1,  | abuseOh my God. That was so breathtaking. You had it all down perfect. It got me choked up!! You're just an amazing writer. |
| Deanaholic1 2007-11-17 ch 1, | abuseit was good ..sad but in a good way.. |
| that lame loser 2007-09-30 ch 1, | abuseaw that is so sad why dont you write something with the gangs reaction |
| Pictures 2007-06-09 ch 1, | abuse...That was really sad. I loved it, though. Good Job. :) |
| liltrix 2007-06-05 ch 1, | abuseOh my god... that was depressing. Really emotional. Great job; it's very well written. |
| youshi 2007-05-31 ch 1, | abuseAww! that was so good O_O such emotion!!.I liked it ^_^ |
| Kay 2007-05-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseMan, I wish people that actually couldn't write well or make sense with their stories would put that into their summaries instead of people who actually do a good job of it. Because you did do a good job with this story. I think I understood what you were trying to say and it was a good story. Nice job. |
| soda-me 2007-05-18 ch 1, | abusePony is dead. I obviously knew from the summary, but still... Ah well. Writer's gotta do what she's gotta do. I mean, I forced the poor kid to be adopted, so who am I to complain? ;) I don't think it was bad. I liked the colours idea very much, actually, for reasons I can't exactly explain...:S Question: whose voices were the last ones he heard before he died? I'm thinking first Soda, then maybe Steve...? Lol. If you don't want to answer that's okay. Soda-me |
| Heart's Eclipse 2007-05-17 ch 1, | abusewow! this is good!! very deep! i love how you did it with the colours and all! :)(: |
| Witchy_Bitch 2007-05-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow, that was good, and I like the use of colors at the end. But to a colorblind person I don't know what they look like, but I do enjoy thinking about it. Please continue to write more things that are different. |
| TrunksGRL13 2007-05-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was written very well.. It made me wanna cry!! I love how you used each color to represent a different member.. it was creative!! |