 Kay8abc 2009-06-16 . chapter 5Please please please please please continue this story. it is really good. I absolutely love it. I really want to know what happens next. Please send me a pm if or when you will update.
-Kate |
 Alcandre 2008-12-01 . chapter 5Wait a minute. Why hasn't this been updated in over a year? This is REALLY good! You must continue this! They need to work...it...out!! :) |
 Silent-Enigma08 2008-08-05 . chapter 1I'm really liking where this story seems to be headed. I hope you'll add another chapter sometime in the near future. It's really good! ^_^ |
 Nocturne in A Minor 2008-04-04 . chapter 1Oh. My. Gawd. Just wow! I love the idea of Shego undercover; and more than that I think it's a brilliant premise, one I haven't seen anyone else explore yet. Or do so, at any rate, with the same standards that you have. It's nicely paced - Shego and Kim's interactions are believable, Kim's reactions understandable. You've written them - along with the rest of the cast - as very compelling characters, and set the moods beautifully for the plot. Plus you've really got me anticipating more about Shego's background, and the way you're paving to KiGo. XD So hoping you haven't given up on this! |
 Harley Quinn Davidson 2008-03-29 . chapter 5wow. I really like this story. How bad is Kim gonna get it? I can't wait to read, update soon. |
 Cilghal16 2007-09-15 . chapter 5Really good, Bogie. Could use some very fine tuning, but I love the story. Hmm so could our mysterious thief be one Miss Diamond? Please update soon! |
 zenihua 2007-09-03 . chapter 5o.o so mysterious.. so intriguing.. so nice! u gonna update? |
 I Left Fanfiction.Net 2007-08-27 . chapter 5I really enjoy the way you write. :) It's a style that flows very naturally, quite easy to read. You've got a great pace. Anxiously waiting for further on the story. |
 Dandin Matrix 2007-08-26 . chapter 5I haven't signed into in two years but I did so just to tell you that this is, hands-down one of the best Kigo fics that I've ever read. Plus, I just wanted to plead that this story not go to the way of so many other potential epics and die out before being finished. I await further chapters with much enthusiasm. |
 Alchemist PAC 2007-08-15 . chapter 5Well this is definitely a different twist on things. I don't think I've seen a story yet were Shego was a good guy in hiding since her team go days, maybe after she meet Kim or something but not before. Hope to see a new chapter soon. Good luck and have fun writing. |
 F75 2007-08-12 . chapter 5Very interesting fic.
I have started to like KiGo fics.
Update soon! |
 Thoughts13 2007-08-12 . chapter 5woot for shego, I like what your doing alot, I just hope it will stay as awesome as it is, during your next chapters. |
 Tomorrows News 2007-08-08 . chapter 5Hey, sup? Can you call me up later? :D My number is...
But seriously, great story. I love it. Definitely a fanfiction I'd go back to read again and again. You capture Shego effortlessly. I think Kim is spot on as well.
Good sentence structure. You don't stray away from what you're heading for at all. No grammar mistakes, excellent pacing and you capture the heat of the moment. I felt as though I was there listening in on the convo's. You write emotion just as well as plot. Keep it up.
God I love your Shego. |
 Gonzo250 2007-07-07 . chapter 1As i'm too new to send you a pm, I'll leave it in another review:
Not a problem! I find that people are quick to criticise or moan, but praise is not nearly as forthcoming. I try and work it the other way. =P
And it's good that you've broken the writer's block. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Glad my input was appreciated.
Gonzo |
 Gonzo250 2007-07-07 . chapter 5Man, this is some good shit!
I love the way you portray the feelings and emotions of the characters, you make it sound so real, it actually rattled me a bit when I read the 'attack' on Kim by Shego after the debriefing in chapter 5, like it was happening to me, not her.
once again, love the story so far. Amazing work! |