 Ellie-forensicgirl-NCIS16 2007-05-14 . chapter 1Wow! *Gulp* Ok, someone is in pretty deep crap! lol... and yet its grissom again... oh boy, is he ever going to learn? hehe!
Anyways, I think you did a good job on ur story... You put a lot in it, and made it special... U have a lot of inspiration to others and myself... I just want to say excellent work, and good job on character personalities! also, i liked the ending of Ch. 1... made him realize! If you would like me to beta, but, i dont think you need me, you didnt do one mistake, but, still, email me at liztresemer at yahoo dot com... (it wont let u put ur email as so, hope u all can readit! also, if neone reads this, and needs a BETA, plz, plz, plz, let me be ur BETA just email me!
Thanks,
ELizabeth |