Hehehehehehe...crackadelic. No other way to put it. Great ending bit.

Omg, this was freakin' hilarious. :D Oh, man, I'm still laughing. Great one-shot!

Haha!! I can't stop laughing! He wrote his name in permenant marker all over her! That's something I didn't expect at all! haha! I loved this ^^

~Strawberry-Ringo

this was FUNNY, i laughed till my shoulders ache. TRUST ME THEY HURT LIKE THE HOUNDS OF HELL CHEWED ON THEM.

magic marker...did NOT see that one coming! LOL! You get points for originality with that one, because I'm sure most people reading it thought it was going to be another doggie joke. Great job, I love stories that twist at the last moment and throw something at you completely unexpected! I hope you continue to write at some point, I miss reading your work. Until then!

-Rolls on the floor, giggling insanely-

Phu: ...'
-Gleefully continues giggling-
Phu: -.- Phu, ph phu puu.
Bri: Er, he said that Tor really liked this one-shot, and..?
Phu: Phu puu phuphu.
Bri: And that she really can't stop laughing.-Nods triumphantly-

That was funny!

well... that was different.. not complete though.

Hahaha! I really hope he added a "Inuyasha was here" somewhere on her body just for the heck of it! I don't know why so many people believe yokai mark each other by biting, considering the healing ability wouldn't leave a scar. And see with Kouga and Ayame; they are promised simply by a conversation they once had when Ayame was still a child. No biting there. Kagome in this fic... could she get over the stereotype role or what? "I'm the sacrificing maiden, look how brave I am to offer myself for our love, for the love me and the blood-craving beast share!" Yuck! I'm glad to see you thought of this too. Brilliant fiction! P.s. I've written one about scentclaim, but truth be told, I don't believe that one work either. Just felt like writing it. D.s.

that was halirious

Excellent story.

Highly amusing, glad to see you're back.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza

heeheehee...that was some seriously fucked up funny shit.

I'm dying with laughter right now lol.

Hahaa...i can't type...

LMAO. That is so funny...but would also be so typically "simple" of our Inuyasha. Sexy...but just a little bit dim, LOL. I really enjoyed this!

hahaha that was so god!