Sad and sweet... so beautiful

For once, I thought that Mylene would be a nice mother smiling at her child's present... But it was... better.
I loved the ending. And the idea of the flower that represents death fitted so perfectly... Just perfect.

I didn't know the lily represented death. Oh, Zelos! >.

Just wanted to say that you deserve so much more credit for this story than it's actually gotten. This is extremely well written, which is rare for and captures the relationship between Zelos and his mother quite well. I actually thought this would just be a cute fluff story, but then realizing about the flower of death and why Mylene was smiling was heart breaking. Just perfect for an angst story!~ Great job with this. XD

Gosh… that was so sad… and yet Zelos’ childhood innocence was very sweet. T.T I’m almost lost for words. But I can assure you that’s a good thing in this case. Your writing is excellent, not overflowing with overly intricate details (which would make the story lag) but just detailed enough to really emphasise the emotion. I think you got the balance just right. And you got Zelos perfectly in character too, its good to see someone successfully portray his serious side. (I’ve attempted it myself in the past but didn’t really manage to pull it off.) All in all I liked this fic a lot; the idea is original (it’s rare to find fics focusing on the relationship between Zelos and his mother) and you did a very good job with it! Oh and as far as I know, Lilies do symbolise death… T.T

Aw...how sad...poor Zelos...

It's nice. I've never seen someone actually do this type of thing before. Well, I have to ask. His mom is blonde? I thought she had red hair as well. Did you varify that her hair was not red from the painting of her in Zelos's mansion?

Very nice. I love the bitter-sweet morbid tone it has. Your writing flowed very well, too.

Sorrow

Aw! This was kinda sweet (and morbid) all in one. I liked it, good job.

Very good. This sounded like something that Zelos would do. Such a tragic story...But excellent job, nonetheless. I shall add this to my favorites.

Your Father's Day idea seems intriguing. I like both ideas, so whatever you write will be O.K. by me.

Ahh~~
They was really nice! I loved it! (I love fics with Mylene in them! XD)
I love how you didn't make her out to be cruel or completely hearless :]
And little Zelos was so cute! :D