I like it. The bold words are lyrics, aren't they? From...March of the Witch hunters? I'm not sure whether that's how the song is called, but I like the lyrics. Especially how Boq nearly called her Elphaba, but then said 'The witch'.

This is awesome ♥ I love how as it goes on, more things are emphasized in bold. It's a cool effect. And *wibbles* you finally saw Wicked? Jeeaalloouuss. xD;

When I finish the book, I want to write some. x3; I read about half of it, left it in my locker, and it was borrowed without permission. So when I get it back...

Anywho,

Great story! ♥

Oh...poor Boq. I just saw the play last Saturaday, so that scene is still fresh in my mind. Where did you go see it?

ANGSTY MEMORIES! I like the take on the WWotE scene, like he felt himself becoming heartless and then realized his heart was going *pop*, and his reasoning for Elphaba being green. "Goodness made her sick, made her queasy." Excellently done, if you did it all. Keep reading and writing! -LostOzian

Ah, poor Boq. Whom can he love? They seem all the same.

Good job on entering this fandom, hon!

hmm, pretty good. I always felt pretty sorry for Boq, but then again if he told Nessa the truth he would not have been hurt. Wickedness is so misunderstood. =( Nice work!!