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| LY00 2008-05-25 ch 28, | abuseFantastic! What an excellent story. This is easily the best SG1/SGA crossover story I have read, and probably one of the best fanfic stories period. Everyone was perfectly in character and even the interactions between people who haven't met in canon are great. The plot is wonderful, complex and plausible, but not confusing. I really enjoyed the combination of the different aspects of both the SG1 and SGA universes, and bringing the Goa'uld to Atlantis was genius. I'm really looking forward to more stories from you. Perhaps a sequel, since Ba'al got away? Thanks for writing. |
| Teldra 2008-03-18 ch 28, | abuseGreat story :) |
| The Swordsman 2008-03-05 ch 28, | abuseThis was such a cool story; I just love fics involving the Ancient download(s). The Swordsman |
| avidgokufan 2008-03-02 ch 28, | abuseVery, very nice. Your story has the three things I like in my stargate stories: 1. It's clean. No smut to be found (thank you). 2. It's well written with an excellent plot. 3. It's all about Jack. What more could you ask for? Thank you again. keep up the good work. |
| CedarPineSpruce 2008-01-23 ch 28, | abuseI am in complete awe. This story was smart, in character, interesting and a great read. And the reason I read fan-fiction - it was better than TV and mainstream books. So much better. Thank you so much for an afternoon of delightfully engrossing reading. *hugs* |
| Stahchild 2008-01-22 ch 28, | abuseThat was AMAZING!! One of the best SGA/SG1 crossovers I've read in a very very very long time. I would love to read a one shot or even a sequel about one of Jons days in Atlantis or even how he would fit in during Season 2 :). Thank you for writing this. |
| WBH21C 2008-01-15 ch 28, | abuseSo very well done! |
| WraithRune 2008-01-05 ch 28, | abuseLove it! |
| Diane 2008-01-03 ch 28, anon. | abuseI've been out of SG1 fandom for a while so I've just discovered this story but what a wonderful find. Every character well written, a wonderful plot and great use of CloneJack and Atlantis (the city). There is probably more intelligent feed back I could give but right now I just want to say "thank You" and "YAY" for fantastic story-telling. This is why I love fandom. Although it is a bit frustrating that this is far better than most of the stuff that TPTB can come up with. |
| melonfusion 2007-12-19 ch 28, anon. | abuseI loved this! I love that everyone got to interact at some point. I loved the plot! And I love what you did with clone!Jack. The idea of him in Pegasus with John is so fun to contemplate. Thank you for sharing this. |
| Harm Marie 2007-11-13 ch 28, | abuseAbsolutely great story. Very funny, exciting and cool. |
| trecebo 2007-09-18 ch 28, | abuseThis was totally awesomeness in extreme! Everyone was beautifully in voice, you brought back mini-Jack (a major plus), and had a helluva plot to contain it all. I tried to read it in one mass sitting but had to stop...late nights not good. I finished, obviously, and I have to say the reccy was worth it all. I will be checking your other work and recommending it myself. |
| Psychee 2007-09-03 ch 28, | abuseThis was one of the best and most "plausible" Jack-clone stories I have ever read. The plot was compelling, the characterizations good and the writing done well. I especially enjoyed the epilogue and would love, and beg if needed, to see some stories of Jack on Atlantis. Normally, I don't tend to like AU stories (as these would be) but give this story as a launch point and I think they would be an excellent read. I always like to thank authors for the enjoyment a story has given me as they put a lot of time and work into the stories; therefore, thank you, thank you very much. |
| Nelarun 2007-08-28 ch 28, | abuseI loved this story... even if school work has forced me to read this over several days... I never once got lost during the story, or even felt confused. You had this written amazingly. It felt like I was reading one of the novels. Well done. Nela P.s. I think you got Rodney's characterisation here down pact. not an easy thing to do. Well done! |
| CaroleJ 2007-08-17 ch 1, | abuseHi--I just finished The Pegasus Connection and am overwhelmed by the quality of your work. The fic was complex, extremely well-plotted, funny, compelling and so much more. I plan to read it again soon, simply because reading your work is such a joy, regardless of whether I know the outcome of the story. Thanks for such a great effort. I hope you write more Stargate fiction some day. |