This is an amazing story that I thoroughly enjoyed reading. I only wish you'd continue it as you left so many things unfinished that's it's a bit depressing. Thank you though for writing this.

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Uh you do know that Ba'al and Dr Weir never met right?

Hate to tell you this. But 1 at that point in time Baal DID NOT know where Atlantis was. 2 This story is getting more stupid all the time.

General Jack still sounds his own sarcastic self even in his private thoughts, LOL! I hadn't even thought about the possibility of his ex, Sarah, someday running into Jon. Talk about awkward and hard to explain!

LOVE the way Jon's teachers can't figure him out. "...never got on so well with gravitational forces..." LOL, is this a veiled reference to nearly getting sucked into that black hole through the Gate? Well, for a pilot I suppose that could refer to gravity in general, as that's what causes a plane to crash, too! Quick thinking to come up with a plausible excuse for the calculations in the margins, I NEVER thought that fast in high school!

Another great chapter. You even capture the slightly odd cadence of Teyla's speech somehow, as well as Rodney and Zelenka's rivalry!

I really love your characterizations in this chapter, especially Jon as seen by his school friend. Yeah, I can't see Jack's clone actually fitting into any specific catagory! And the dialogue between Beckett and Rodney was just perfect!

This was really, really cool! I am amazed at how well you tied all the various plots & paths together! Wow!

Thank you so much for writing such a wonderful, wonderful story!

I've read your story through twice now and really I should have left reviews for every chapter, but I couldn't make myself stop for that long! I love your style and the peek at the inner mind workings of the characters. I loved how we got little insights into various characters from another people's thoughts, like Daniel's thoughts about General O'Neill while he was in the infirmary and especially Jamie's thoughts about the contridictory character of Jon.
I still can't believe the teen clone storyline was never revisited on SG-1! It was such a fun story to get your mind around! I would really love to see more 'Adventures of Jon in High School' stories with a little 'black-ops' business in the background.
I would hope that after a year or two that it wouldn't be too 'weird' for Jack and Jon to have some sort of relationship, even if it was a vague and distant one. How could they not want to occasionally check in with each other?

I'm enjoying your story - especially the parts about Jon, as 'seen' through the eyes of his friend Jamie. You've done an excellent job of creating his character!! The three storylines are incredibly detailed and I'm looking forward to seeing how they evenually merge.

Baal got there first! I want to keep reading, but my eyes are going buggy and I'm going to pee my pants. TMI! TMI!

Again, I adore your characterizations.

Your Jack is wonderfully hilarious and endearing and spot-on.

I found this fic by fluke and I'm so very greatful. The storyline and characterizations are wonderful. Thank you so much for sharing.

It took me four days to read this but I could barely put it down... fabulous. I loved the individual story threads at the beginning and the way they came together to form a seamless whole at the end. All the characterizations were great, but I thought that Teal'c and Jon were especially perfect -- you've obviously given real thought to Jon's issues and the ending is just right for him. Great work!