dude...cool

FANTASTIC! I love both these series, wonderful cross-over!

brilliant i luv the way u decribed alan's power lol i think u may hav taken powers from diffrent tv series not jus heroes but it was fantastic. An believ it or not i actually understood the scientific terms so i take my hat off to u cause its a very hard thing to do make me understand science lol

Im sorry for not reviewing sooner my computer till now was telling me I had revied your story.
I loved it I hope you continue soon.
Very cool powers you've given the 'Boys and Jeff'
Cool begining and your a great writer.
Keep it up

Funny

I most certainly hope you take this up; it's FAB! But you're right to wait until the others are finished. Good call. Hope things ease up for you at work; short-handedness is a bear, isn't it?

Great story, please continue with this soon as it is very interesting and I'd like to see how it goes.

It's offical, you come up with the best ideas for fics. I really hope you add more onto this fic, I would love to see it turned into a fully fledged story.

"He has a little trouble...stopping." You still have my laughing with that and it wasn't really "part" of the fiction. Poor Alan, it's so true, he can never really restrain/stop himself.

You're back! YAY!
I loved this chapter, even though it was in bits. But that made it all the more interesting, not knowing what was going to happen next.
Looking forward to wherever you intend on taking this one.
Hob x