Very powerful and a really shocking ending but who did richard call to kill everyone?

You must of been in a bad mood when you wrote this story

this story is so sad!! *Sniff*

OMG i loved it

I read the entire story and i'm in love with it! LOL! Please check out my first poem, Agonizing Dishonesty. I would be honoured if you did.

Hey This was an excellent chapter .It reminded me somewhat of romeo & juliet . Everyone evil met a fitting end so thats good.I was surprised when he killed Alex but then I guess he paid for it in the end .

until next review

winkygirl12

Man...I loved this story! I'm gonna post the 2nd chapter of ur story today! please check it out!

Wow, so didn't expect that at all. Total twist! Good story! Thanks for writing it!! :):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)

This is brillinat can't wait for the next chapter!

Drama Drama Drama! I almost can't wait for the next chapter! It's hard to be patient but I'll do my best! keep up the good work! :):):):):):)

Nice Chapter but to bad I am not goin to see the ending because I am leaving on vacation tommorrow I think I will read the ending when I come back

Hello yay ding dong the wicked witch is dead.which witch? The wicked witch.Ding dong the wicked witch is dead !! sry had to do that thought it fit nicely. This was an excellent chapter!! I like the whole 24 theme in the background that was funny. I will be sad to see this story end but please update soon.

until next review

Winkygirl12

OMG! That was really really AWESOME! So my name's makeeda and I was on deviantart and I saw your Hating You Chapter 5. So I read it, but was really confused, so I was like; I MUST get the other parts of that. And that is basically how I have become addicted to your stories. I am f-ing excited for Threatening Desire 10. I also wanted to say that there should be more interaction between enemies in this story.(I.e.: Give Star and Blackfire a HUGE battle scene or something.) But anywho; just wanted to say your an awesome writer, and I love your stories.

loved the chapter please update soon Please read my profile for important news

Interesting chapter. Loved the cuteness of Alexis in the beginning!! Thanks for updating! Keep it up! :):):):):):):)