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Reviews For: At The End of the Day

csimouse
2008-04-20
ch 1,
abuseI liked this story. Thank you for having Brass intervene.
WalkerTRngr
2007-09-29
ch 1,
abuseVery nicely done. Characterization was spot on!!
kaheels
2007-05-17
ch 1, anon.
abuseGreat story, I really thought you were true to the characters. In fact, that's exactly how I imagined the post TGTBTD conversation going. Thanks for putting it down so I can convince myself that's what really happened.
thegreatbluespoon
2007-05-16
ch 1,
abuseI loved it.

I'm going to hate tomorrow as much as i hate LH...but I still loved this.

Hopefully you won't let an ignorant finale stop you from writting the great stories that you do.

Jess
TDCSI
2007-05-16
ch 1,
abuseAh, I guess it's safe to say that's a much better ending. I was pictureing like a paragrapgh or two, not 10. But it's all good, and see people like it. I told you it didn't sound whinny. Good for you, keep up the good work by updating your other stories. PLEASE...
seeyoustandingthere
2007-05-16
ch 1,
abuseThis is really sweet, and nicely written. A picky reviewer might say that the dialogue could be a little snappier, but it didn't detract from the overall atmosphere of the piece. I like it a lot.
Severien
2007-05-16
ch 1,
abuseVery nicely written!
Peggy47
2007-05-15
ch 1,
abuseI'm ready for Grissom and Sara to make a joint announcement of their romance to Ecklie, Brass, and the team. Then they can get on with their life together no matter what the changes may be. But, I am not ready for Grissom to admit to the relationship only because of a tragic event in his and Sara's life.
katydid13
2007-05-15
ch 1,
abuseI really like this one!
ayesha-s
2007-05-15
ch 1,
abuseahh sweet!
jtbwriter
2007-05-15
ch 1,
abuseThis is good-angsty-and Sara is a bit too quick to jump the gun, but good! Thanks!
Vanes
2007-05-15
ch 1, anon.
abuseVery good. I liked your story. Maybe you could continue it. I read lots of stories about GSR and I like this one. Thanks
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