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| csimouse 2008-04-20 ch 1, | abuseI liked this story. Thank you for having Brass intervene. |
| WalkerTRngr 2007-09-29 ch 1, | abuseVery nicely done. Characterization was spot on!! |
| kaheels 2007-05-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat story, I really thought you were true to the characters. In fact, that's exactly how I imagined the post TGTBTD conversation going. Thanks for putting it down so I can convince myself that's what really happened. |
| thegreatbluespoon 2007-05-16 ch 1, | abuseI loved it. I'm going to hate tomorrow as much as i hate LH...but I still loved this. Hopefully you won't let an ignorant finale stop you from writting the great stories that you do. Jess |
| TDCSI 2007-05-16 ch 1, | abuseAh, I guess it's safe to say that's a much better ending. I was pictureing like a paragrapgh or two, not 10. But it's all good, and see people like it. I told you it didn't sound whinny. Good for you, keep up the good work by updating your other stories. PLEASE... |
| seeyoustandingthere 2007-05-16 ch 1, | abuseThis is really sweet, and nicely written. A picky reviewer might say that the dialogue could be a little snappier, but it didn't detract from the overall atmosphere of the piece. I like it a lot. |
| Severien 2007-05-16 ch 1, | abuseVery nicely written! |
| Peggy47 2007-05-15 ch 1, | abuseI'm ready for Grissom and Sara to make a joint announcement of their romance to Ecklie, Brass, and the team. Then they can get on with their life together no matter what the changes may be. But, I am not ready for Grissom to admit to the relationship only because of a tragic event in his and Sara's life. |
| katydid13 2007-05-15 ch 1, | abuseI really like this one! |
| ayesha-s 2007-05-15 ch 1, | abuseahh sweet! |
| jtbwriter 2007-05-15 ch 1, | abuseThis is good-angsty-and Sara is a bit too quick to jump the gun, but good! Thanks! |
| Vanes 2007-05-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery good. I liked your story. Maybe you could continue it. I read lots of stories about GSR and I like this one. Thanks |