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otogii
2009-10-17 . chapter 6
that was awsome!~! you had me staying up for the past 3 days till about 2 in the morning just to see what happens!

what made me a little ticked but yet excited at the same time is that you bad guy prof julius use ryu kokki and pyramid turtle those were MY MAIN monsters in my deck xD well not main but definately my favorites

hm i really shouldnt ask for more when you already written so much but maybe like a quick epilouge to show the tournament and what atem reaction is to maybe the mariage of yugi and tea or his reaction to the puzzle or something

ANYWAY! i never really read much fanfiction outside the dbz universe unless they are cross overs but i saw your story on the favorites of one of the people i keep an eye on this site so...

GREAT JOB!
WildfireDreams
2009-08-12 . chapter 6
Thank you so much for writing such a fantastic work of art. This is undeniably the absolute best story I have ever read on this site. I am torn between being sad that it is over and happy that I was able to read it in its entirety. You are a magnificent writer and I will very likely reread this in the future. I'm sorry I did not review every individual story in this saga let alone individual chapters but I was so drawn into this story that I had to read more until there was nothing left. I thank you once again for writing this masterpiece.
Kimoko02
2009-07-11 . chapter 6
Nice storY I read this and Revival and I love them both I love how you connect everything together, :D awesome!!
iSparrow
2008-12-11 . chapter 6
Let me start off by saying that I have never been a big YugixTéa fan. I'm more of a puzzleshipping fangirl myself, so for a long time, I'd put off reading this story of yours because I just didn't want to deal with the peachshipping.

I started reading this story about a week ago. And ever since then, I have been completely hooked.

It's one thing to say that I'm in love with it - which actually might be the wrong choice of words, seeing as I don't think there /are/ any words to describe how much I enjoyed this story. I truly do believe that, if it had not been a fanfic, you could have published this. You did your research (which is something not many do nowadays!), you planned it all out, and you stayed completely true to the canon. If the Yu-Gi-Oh! fandom ever has a conclusion to wrap up the original Duel Monsters show/manga, this would definitely be it.

But this was more than just a closure story. It was another story, completely separate from the canon - because it's /your/ story, and you made it that way. You took a manga/anime that we all loved and added to it, bringing the characters back for one more round of life and lessons to give us a beautiful ending to the remarkable tale of the Nameless Pharaoh.

I sound like such a sap. I'm sorry.

Look, I'll say it again: I was never a peachshipper. I have my own views on how the YGO pairings should play out, and in the end, that's all they are - views. They didn't happen. And somehow, this story made me rethink those opinions, and look deep and realistically into this fandom to reconsider my shippings. (Not that I think I'll ever give up my favorite pairings. But that doesn't mean I can't have room for another. :])

It was wonderful. It was fantastic. It kicked ass and took names. Insert whatever words in there that you want to, because I have decided that I will not foam at the mouth until you "UPDATE SO0N PLZ!!K14!" - this is clearly a masterpiece not to be tampered with.

Thank you for sharing this fanfiction. In a way, it didn't really seem like a fanfiction at all. ;]

Rock on and God bless,
- iSparrow
Ray Venn Hakubi
2008-10-18 . chapter 6
Just finished reading this all the way from Revival Prologue, and... wow. I can't say much else.

Definitely worth the read. Probably one of the best fanfics on the site. I'd favourite it, but I'm afraid you'll have to settle for an Author Favourite since it's split into so many parts and I can't pick just one of them.
Thail
2008-09-22 . chapter 6
you know what?I love your stories!seriously,it was like reading the official continuation of the series...wow!
Huudel
2008-08-08 . chapter 6
I just finished reading Revival and Identity series, and I must say I enjoyed every minute of it. The themes and relationships are interesting, the character development is just amazing, and I had no idea someone could write about card games and make them so alive and captivating. The whole deal with Yugi and Atem is just... wow. Thank you for writing such an awesome story!
annonymous
2008-07-21 . chapter 1
How in the hell could you only have just under 70 reviews after this great story!? I couldn't stop reading it even if i wanted to! All the series or chapters were fantastic and it was a nice thrilling way to conclude the somewhat abrupt ending of Yugioh. Great job with that! And I wish that there was an anime continuation of your version!
The Danvers Girls
2008-07-09 . chapter 6
Nice! ^^ Sorry for my mistake in Identity I. This is awesome!

Favourite bit altogether...

-Identity IV: Main Phase - - Chapter 15: Bonded-

Seriously, I loved that one. Then again, Atem's my favourite *snicker*

-Sammi
Leela's Back
2008-03-29 . chapter 1
I've read almost all of your Yugioh sagas and I am so impressed with them. I know that the "Identity" series is over, and it was a very satisfying ending and now I noticed that you have moved on to Danny Phantom as a fandom favorite, but I must ask you, will there be more to come in your Yugioh fics? Will we ever find out how Kaiba and Sara are doing together? and do you have uncut versions of your fics with perhaps more detail in the love scenes (Lemon) posted somewhere else? because I would love to read on how Yugi's sex life might be like. I really hope there are more yugioh fics coming from you in the near future.
Hakurei Ryuu
2008-03-18 . chapter 6
life goes on.

i honestly wasn't expecting to finish this tonight, especially as it's currently three in the morning, but i just had to see the ending. and, as always, it couldn't be more perfect. thank you for the wonderful story.

Ryuu-chan
Hakurei Ryuu
2008-03-18 . chapter 2
oh, i SERIOUSLY enjoyed that, i really did!

what strikes me as funny is that, aside from mokuba, it's JOEY who understands kaiba best. despite all the digs they make at each other, they have complementing personalities and abilities, and they can read each other as well or better than their respective touchstones. this scene personified that better than anything i've ever seen! -applaudes-

and, for all their differences, they're more alike than either would care to admit.
Keith Fraser
2008-03-05 . chapter 6
I've read through the whole of your Revival and Identity series (several times, in the case of most of the chapters), and it's definitely one of the best fanfics I've read. It brings out the best in the source material without altering it excessively - given that I got into YGO via the Abridged Series, I was very impressed that you managed to make a believably serious and dramatic story out of it.

My favourite element of the series was the Kaiba/(Ki)sara plotline. I really, really like the way you write Kaiba as a guy who tries to convince himself he does everything for selfish reasons, and who stubbornly resists getting in on the whole 'power of friendship' thing. It makes him a good counterpoint to the rest of the cast, and keeps the story varied and interesting.
xheartkreuzx
2008-02-06 . chapter 6
awe. these stories were soo cute!
i loved the whole series!
demonwithasoul
2008-01-22 . chapter 6
As promised here's my review after reading this fic:

Ever since the revival series I've always thought this fic was the perfect closing for the yugioh series after the ceremonial duel, I didn't like it when they left so many great characters out of the loop at the end like Mai, her relationship with Joey, Serenity and the triangle between herself ,Tristan and Duke and the Seto x Kisara and Yugix Teax Atem triangle as well. The way the orichalcos played an important part was also good since it's a good idea never exploited to it's full potential. And the best part is that you left the GX series completely out of this (seriously, although a yugioh anime it's not as good as the original thing with yugi anc co.)

The only thing that this fic missed was the closure of Ishizu x Mahaad pairing, but hopefully one day you'll write a special chapter of said pairing (hopefully soon;)

Finally, this may not be the best review you've received but I can tell you this: this is for me the best yugioh fic out there, you're a good writer and I expect to read more great work from you in a near future (not danny phantom since I dont know what the heck that is)

Keep up writting

Demonwithasoul
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