Despite the obvious attempt of mockery towards 'bad fanfiction' as the original purpose of this fic's creation.

The story is actually awesome :D

Heck, it's even more awesome than those badfics.

Ha ha ha ha. It was awesome. Totally halarious. It was just great. I love these types of fanfiction with the marysue parodies. It really brightens up my day. I can't wait for the sequal or more of your writing.

" Half of the readers who didn’t TaLk liek thiz were thinking the same thing."

Man, that cracked me up. That was pretty a good parody, I enjoyed how you pretty used up all the cliche plots plauging the Naruto section.

Great job!

Bouncefox

This is freakin' hilarious. I'm so glad I found this off of someone's favourites list. Seriously, great job parodying all those overused, horrible plot devices. :D

Brilliant. Hilarious and utterly cracky. Terrific parody.

Two words : pure genius

*lawl*

lmfao that was funny X3
~Larka

Oh god... O.O
The greatest blob of humour I've read. Ever. Who doesn't know about all the cliches? The lost-and-found Uchihas-who-survived? Jeeze.. Great job, pal.

The beginning was good but the more the story progressed it became a pale copy of all the "Cliche' Parody Fics" that were written on this site.

I found some parts amusing, but the rest was just plain stating the obvious in a less than stellar way. I don't want to be mean, just constructive criticism. You don't leave anything for the reader and a couple of the author notes were annoying and added nothing to the story flow, on the contrary they derailed it.

It could have been a more witty cliche' but since it was written 2 tears ago, I leave you the benefit of the doubt. That said, I like how Sasuke reacted in some scenes.

But the choppy sentences and 'why-this-crack?-Just-coz-I-can' logic fails to be funny if presented blandly. No special style is needed, just a speck of wit, originality and intelligence. That and the ability to animate your cliche'd characters, but in this fic they seemed to be even worse that the poor misguided (but serious) writers' fantasies.

Parody is a good literary tool, but if you use just to make fun of others instead of breathing life in your own work...Then you are no better than the above mentioned misguided souls .

Good luck on getting better.

That was so amazing, I couldn't stop laughing, I love you despite having never met you and having skipped over your disclaimer which was in your voice because it looked boring XD

OMG, pleeze make it into a trilogy. this fic was amazing...IT HAD ITACHI IN IT e... pleze make it so itachi actually took over sasuke's body with the mangeko sharingan so sakuras child is his and that it should grow up in the akatsuki layer then fall in love with Deidra...I WANT UR BABIES

LMAO
xD
That was soo funny :D
I ended up choking on my water [that i was drinking when i was reading the story] and spewed it all out >_>

Love the story :D

I love this.

This was absolutely hilarious! Great job!

ahahahahahahaha... hahahaha... haha, okay i'm doen now x3
super-special-awesomely-hilarious story~! xD