I demand a sequel! >_<

So? What happened to Sasuke?

Tell me he lived..

you evil evil person...

but great fic nonethless.. XD

make a sequel!XD

Oh, wow. Really great start. I love Sasuke's concern about his team, and his obvious confusion even though he's finally achieved his goal. Naruto, a brilliant hero, shines in character. Two thumbs up for taking something that's already been done and making it cool again.

:')

Great story,and I hope you remember me...anyways. I liked the story, and I loved the poem,who wrote it.

That was quite well written. Throughout the whole story I could sense the presence of rain, and it requires skill for a writer to make a reader feel something like that.
This part - “I’m… sorry,” Sasuke choked out, his world swimming and starting to go black. “I never wanted… to hurt you.” - Oh My. You captured Sasuke's character so perfectly there. Sasuke would obviously not have said that if he wasn't sure he was dying .. and that is really the truth - he HADN'T wanted to hurt Naruto. It was something that had to be done.
That was perfect. The character's personalities were captured beautifully - Thanks for posting this. XP

: .Tenpa. :

Lovely job! Wonderful descriptions! Plz continue this! ^^

Sky-eyed Kitsune =^^=
:~;I IS CHEESE!;~:

AWW! No! No Sasuke dying!!
I loved that kiss- and the way Sasuke reacted when Naruto found him, he seemed pretty out of it.
The mention of him hacking Itachi to pieces was a good one too- yeah I could imagine Sasuke going crazy when finally fighting his brother.

AW!! I loved it! It was sad and I was crying at the same parts that Naruto was and-and-and- I just loved it!!

-Midnight

HAH. You don't know whether or not it sucks? Two words: YOU'RE CRAZY! Of course it's good! This one even made me cry and everything! It just pisses me off when I read fanfictions like this, because it's so goddamn good I wish Kishimoto-sensei would realize Naruto and Sasuke have it for each other and just make the fanfiction real. *cries* You're really too good. Seriously. I love this fic so much. I swear, you're a frickin' God or something.

I'm so... Amazed.

This was so well done, so beautifully crafted and fit the two of them completely. I nearly started crying because all the emotions got to me and trust me, I'm not the type to be so sentimental that I'd cry. You captured Naruto and Sasuke's feelings magically. The way you described the kiss was just how I'd imagine one involving them to be- Subtly passionate and bloody. Well done.

:O wow :) very very very great :D loved it xx

Oh yeah... this is awesome.

nice one. very nice. so glad sasuke didn't die ^_^

You write pretty broken Sasuke so well. (Though aah, Team Hebi, I love you don't die. ;_;)

Their kissing =