Love this line: "He was careless with so many things, himself most of all, but he was so terribly careful with you."

Hi,

I just wanted to tell you what a fantastic writer you are. I've been a part of this fandom since the beginning, and this last season I haven't really been an active part of the fandom. There'd been a real decline in fanfic quality and I just sort of kept to reading the 'old' band of writers (which I suppose includes myself, but that doesn't matter) adn ignoring the newer ones. I was pointed towards your fic, which I can't believe I've never seen before. And I just want to thank you for keeping the hope inside me alive. There may be some great new blood in this fandom after all.

Keep up the great work,
Di

This is probably the most touching 'after-the-accident-scenario' I've ever read! I love the second person perspective and you get Neela so well. Why couldn't the writers of the show make something like this happen...
Oh, and are you going to write more for ER? Because I would love to read more from you!

Shadow_diva just recced this to me, and I love her for it. It's a brilliant piece of work. I really like well-written second person, and this is it. Do you mind if I nominate you in our Roomies Awards? Cos this is the quality of fic we need there :)

Lol, Fi.

This was great, you really got everyone's character down well, not just Neela's.

Shadow_Diva recced this to me, and for that I'm really glad. This is a wonderful piece of work. You write Neela very well.

Emony.

Great story!

The emotions thrown around are fantastic, you can really feel what Neela is talking about!

Amythest Girl.

Nice! I really enjoyed reading that. It really felt like I was in her head.

Aw..this was so good! A real tear-jerker. Thanks for offering us a happier ending to Ray-Neela than NBC (gr). Loved seeing it all from Neela's POV as well. And the last line was perfect - "there's a song you can't get out of your head." A perfect tie-in to the beginning, and a perfect summation of the story. Nice job!

Really great fic. It was so well written, totally conveyed the situation, events, emotions and people really well. Your obviously a very talented writer, so I hope that you'll write more fics soon! :)

Really beautiful :)

very well writen and an interesting start!! cant wait to see what happens next. update soon!!

Awesome story! Very well written and I think catches Neela's thoughts perfectly if only they would something like this on the show! Loved it!

This is a great fic. It seems so Neela like. The thing with the CD, the guilt with Tony, the month of May thing - all of it just seemed so perfect for her. Really, really well written.

Oh my God, this was phenomenal. Really, truly, phenomenally written. You got Neela down cold. And the narrative flows so well - it totally sucked me in. Great job. :D