Awesome story! I'm bummed that there is no more story, but it ended well.

Just dropping you a line to say I downloaded all of this saga, copied and pasted it into a word document (all 600+ pages of it) and I'm dragging it with me to read on my plane ride. KaliPhantom recommended it and I'm really looking forwards to reading it!

I'll send you review when I get back. :) Thank you for the reading material!

-Cori

Reading this was just amazing. It makes me wonder how much of your time you dedicate to writing these stories.

^-^ That was indeed an interesting ending to the story. Nice way to wind things up. ;A; I wonder what will happen to Valerie and Dan now? Ah well, sometimes not knowing is better. xDD

Anyways, good show, old man! It's been fun reading your story while it lasted!

Oh man, I missed the party! D: I wrote it on my calendar, too...

I think this was the perfect way to end the story. I'd ask relentlessly for you to make a sequel, but I don't think there are any loose ends to tie up, and making another plotline sounds like a huge chore. I'd actually kind of like to see Dan and Clockwork interacting, but again, anything that could be said between them is implicit in the story, so it wouldn't be necessary.

The interaction between Dan and Valerie here is excellent. Dan is unrepentant and Valerie is unforgiving, but they're both willing to ignore that for the sakes of their friends. It seems like they're both relieved that their rivalry has finally cooled from its all-consuming obsession into a lingering disdain, and that the need to kill one another doesn't run so strongly any more. They're even teasing each other, or at least Dan is teasing Valerie, like reluctant allies. I think they could be friends, potentially, if not for their gruesome past. Then again, what's in the past should stay there; forgive and forget, right? They assure each other that they hate each other, but contempt seems to have grown familiarity - it's almost a kindred, familial hatred.

I found Clockwork's unexpected appearance amidst the Observants an appropriate conclusion to his initial disappearance. Although as the Observants were discussing things, it seemed like they had someone in mind to hand Clockwork's mantle over to. Dan, perhaps? That would have made an interesting twist indeed, although at that point he would be estranged from the rest of the cast, and I have a feeling he doesn't want to leave them forever. Dan as Master of Time - wouldn't that be something? Alas, Clockwork has returned, so there goes my short-lived theory.

You've done some great work on this story, this series of stories, and in connecting all the events and tying everything up tightly at its end. I'll make sure I read anything else you happen to put up here. :D

This is an amazing story. Thank you so much for taking the time out of life to write something this good.
Mutual hatred is better than mass destruction I do suppose….
And I was expecting the Clockwork thing, but the novelty pen made my day. I want one of those now…
May you be blessed by darkness!
-Nekozawa
kukukukukukuku
(I’m gonna go play Devil May Cry 3 now…and die. A lot.)

Sigh, it's over. I have some mixed feelings about that... Still, I love the last lines.

This was fantastic. I loved this story to bits, and the ending was both sufficiently funny and a good wrap-up. Will there be a third story? Perhaps something that continues Dan's 'road to salvation', or whatever he's travelling? I'm just curious.

Happy writing!

-- Out-Of-Control-Authoress

Hahahahahahahahahaha. The biggest surprise of this episode was Clockwork and the fact nobody realized until then that staff left behind was just a pen.

(Time stands still for a second)

All 4 Muses: WHAT?!

A. Pen. His backup staff is a *pen*. (Snort) Figures. I am glad he wasn't obliterated. Clockwork's always been one of my fav characters.

The End. *Fine*. Exit stage right. (Sigh)

What are you going to do when you wake up tomorrow morning and realize that the work you've been doing since March 3, 2006, is finally complete?

I'll try my best to get to that AOL group, but no guarantees. My internet's acting funky, hence my lateness in posting this review. I would be interested in reading that 14 page bonus pack as an extra to this story or a stand alone "oneshot".

See you around.

~Moony's Metamorphmagus

Excellent ending. Very in character, and interesting. :D Well done. I"m kind of sad to see it end, really.

I don't think I've reviewed this story in the past for one reason or another. But here I am, the last chapter. I read the stories previous to this one and picked up this story around chapter twenty, about there anyway. This is one of the first Danny Phantom fics I read. I became extremely interested. I enjoyed this story immensely and always looked forward to new chapters. The fact that this is the last chapter is bittersweet. I'm glad to know what happened yet sad that its over because it was such a great story.

Thank you for sharing Indemnification with us, I had a great time reading it.

So...FFN wouldn't let me review chapter 25 (WTF), so consider this a review of both chapters? (Hopefully, this one goes through...)

Beautiful resolution. Best way to convince Valerie that Dan HAS changed. And...yeah, I guess the Reality Gauntlet had to go, but Paulina took the words out of my head. Such potential, and yet way too dangerous to use.

The novelty pen. THE NOVELTY PEN. THAT IS ONE BIG PEN. I love Clockwork, I really do.

Ah, and thus ends this wonderful story. I look forward to your next endeavor.

Fantastic ending. I'm glad to see how everything fell into place in a way that worked for all of the characters. This series has been beautifully developing these characters and these storylines, and you've done a wonderful job bringing their stories to completion.

Yay!!
I likie a LOT=D
And now it's over...huh>_<
Really awesome fic!!
I'm sad to see it go, but it was well written a good plot--the whole thing was just...fascinating to read, honestly, it was a great idea to write about!
=D
So yeah, I loved it and can't wait to see what you write next!
bye~spiritmind