Hello again,Madmiko...I just read chapter 4 of Hentai Bets,so far I'm impressed with your work especially the dinner date(I am reading it and loving it by the way)Yoko,I admit IS one of my favorite anime characters.Since I'm on the subject here's my favorite list of yuyu hakusho 1)hiei 2)yoko/kurama 3)yusuke more on that later...

nice...was laughing out so loud, they think i was nuts...another story please...

I have to say, this may be one of my all time favorite crossover fics ever. My favorite part was obviously where Naraku decided to expose himself to everything he came in contact with, it had me laughing no matter how many times I went back to that part to relive it. I absolutely adored how you had everyone interact and none of it seemed forced or awkward as I've seen in most crossover fics where the author simply doesn't know how to use more than the main characters. You're beyond talented and I look forward to reading more of the stories you create.

It's rare for me to get hooked on a story to where I end up stay up until the early hours of the morning to finish it. You obviously have immense talent for writing and I hope you continue to write for this pairing.

loved it

Very funny story. I normally do not indulge into humoristic or purely lemons fanfics, but after reading black widow miko I couldn't just go away, I had to see if your style of writing was carried over your other fics. It was well-written, entertaining to a fault, I laughed multiple times and I need to bow to you on the way you wrap up an excellent plot even in a humoristic fic. Very well done, I hope some day I can measure up to that!

Just had to comment this chapter. I love the ending.

"So, you think he's really interested the girl?"
"I know he is. He didn't finish his ice cream."

XD. That was great. :]

Jeez! My family thinks I'm bipolar now... I was reading aa sad story earlier, and now I can't stop laughing! This was awesome! It's great that you didn't let them get away with it, and the betting was halarious!... Had to skip a few of the more explicit spots, though... Ah, well. Is there going to be an epilogue?

middie: *doubled over laughing* hahahahahahaha oh ow my stomach hahahahahahaha!
NEKO: *LAUGHING AND CRYING* HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA OW OK OK *GIGGLES* MAN IM SORRY CAN'T GET OVER THE WHOLE NARAKU THING I READ THAT *GIGGLES* 5 TIMES AND AHEM...SORRY OK THAT WAS JUST TOO FUNY ACTUALLY THIS STORY HASHAD ME GOING FOR A WHILE AND LOOK AT POOR MIDDIE ON THE FLOOR
middie: rofl!
NEKO: WOW ENOUGH SAID MAN OK ON TO THE NEXT CHAPTER! YOSH!

OMG!! LOL I JUST LOVE how you created this story ^-^ almost each chapter had me laugh so hard that sides hurt and had tears in my eyes.
And I'm happy to say I'm Hook with the paring of Hiei and kagome.

OMFG, that was a SERIOUSLY good story! I loved it so much!! I fell over anime style when I read that Jakotsu would be with Hojo.

Jakotsu!! I love that he's the last member. I can't wait to read the rest.

the most awesome hiei kagome story ever, and i'm a huge kurama or sesshoumaru kagome fan. *writes n i owe you babies for writing this note for ya*

that was freaking hilarious! I love it, and great job!!

well!i guessed it did all work out in the end. i stick by my former review except about the part where almost everyone continued deceiving kagome about hiei and kurama's relationship. you've managed to convince me enough (somewhat actually but enough) that the deception was quite essential to your plot development and contributed to the story working out in the end. though basically, you had me convinced mostly due to sesshoumaru's showing. haha. sesshoumaru kicking ass and reigning supreme. i could NEVER argue with that. after all, fluffy-sama remains my favourite favourite favourite anime character. has been for 4 years now.

i was going to review your latest chapter but after reading your review response to peter pan, i just thought to review this fic and add my 2 cents in as well. i'm totally FOR your idea to go back and overhaul some stuff since my impression of kagome so far is that all she has going on for her now is her miko powers (which aren't all that impressive as of so far...not according to her reputation anyway) and her beauty. brains, common sense and logic seems to be sorely lacking. she's been jumping to assumptions too quickly and too often to be solely attributed to jakotsu, miroku and naraku's influence. like the part about her jumping straight into the conclusion that hiei and kurama are lovers by accidentally hearing jakotsu's remarks...you need to look over that part because WHILE jakotsu's comments could have been misunderstood, i had surmised that kagome would know enough of her teammate to know his manner of speech such that she should know enough to double check and not hastily jump to conclusions...

that characteristic does not establish her as a very impressive...or even a competent leader of her group. it reflects quite badly on her leadership skills in fact. so i can totally understand why up till now, many readers probably are questioning you to why is kagome so stupid. i do hope the next few chapters are gonna be redeeming for her...

P.S.: if her teammates and shippo claim to care for her so much, why do they treat her love life as a source of entertainment when they know very well of her inexperience and vulnerability regarding this aspect of her life especially knowing her prior experience with inuyasha? this struck me as something very odd. PLUS! knowing her hesitance to reject hojo's proposal, i would have thought they'd be more sensible to inform her of hiei and kurama being merely friends so that should she make a decision, it would be an informed decision that she won't regret for life.