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| rafionny 2007-05-22 ch 1,  | abusethat was such a cool story! you described the moment perfectly, jajaja now you could do this moment in the POV of the other two characters...! lol congrats |
| sicilybelle 2007-05-20 ch 1, anon. | abusewell done and so well written, and my heart was breaking for eric seeing his face and his eyes begging to come back to be with him instead. (god i need a klenex)! but if they are perfect for each other care so much about each other and love one another they will find there way back together and not even jake can stop that one lol |
| Lilith 2007-05-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseYay! Jake 2 - Eric 0! I so loved the kiss scene, so passionate and agsty on Delko's side. I hope TPTB won't ruin this all next season. Beautiful fic, excellently wtitten and very moving. I can see how bad Eric must feel. Poor guy. |
| Moony's Lady 2007-05-19 ch 1, | abuseJust awesome. You can use words so that they reach directly the heart of people, and move them so naturally. This is sheer talent, imho. Great job, again. |
| randomwriting 2007-05-16 ch 1, | abuseNicely done. Allowing the story to be told from Eric's perspective gave it a completely different feel. Like Eric, the reader is a voyeur, witnessing an intimate moment not meant for our eyes. Lovely poetic lines - you have a wonderful way with words. I enjoyed this very much. |
| calleighsthebest 2007-05-16 ch 1, | abusethis is very good, eric and calleigh should so be together! |
| Janet 2007-05-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow, have not seen the actual episode. But you have given me a good insight. Well written, excellent. Thank you. |