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Reviews for: The Flap of a Butterfly's Wings
Sabishii Kage Tenshi 7/6/10 . chapter 1
I'm definitely liking this one, Ritsuka seems so mature! :D -Lovelovelovelove-
shinohime-chan 4/21/10 . chapter 1
AW KAWAII YAY
Acclivity 12/31/09 . chapter 1
"He still has his ears! He still has his ears!"

You portray everyone wonderfully.
777angeloflove 11/15/09 . chapter 1
KYA! I LOVE THIS STORY!
wieners 8/2/09 . chapter 1
I really love your fic and its concept! I also like the way you defined each of their less pronounced traits. For Ritsuka, his strength and love. For Yuuko, her kindness.

Although, the one thing I am questioning is...the butterfly. I'm not really that far in reading the Loveless manga, but is it significant to it? The manga, I mean. Or, is it just something you added here, like some sort of guardian?

Thank you for taking the time to read my review and thank you for writing something so enjoyable!
Chilo 5/21/09 . chapter 1
Aww! That was cute! Very unique! :3 I liked the idea of mixing Loveless with xHOLiC! It was very well written and I enjoyed reading it!
Zollercoaster 7/5/07 . chapter 1
Beautiful! I love that he didn't choose to make a wish!
Hell's voice 5/20/07 . chapter 1
It's a good story, but it's confusing and every thing is happening too fast...
yuki akai 5/16/07 . chapter 1
lovely one-shot. keep writing more. and i understand the price Ritsuka had to pay to obtain his awnwers. i really like it!
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