Wonderful chapter! Very moving. The way you describe Jack sailing through the storm... so realistic, dramatic, yet poetic.
I'm really amazed.
Write more SOON plz:)

MORE!

I love this chapter! Beautifully written. Once you start reading, you don't want to stop. The atmosphere is wonderful & unique. And this sentence:
"See, our destination is on the other side of said storm", is simply amazing.
I'm enchanted. Please update SOON!

Intriguing beginning! Well written. Please update soon!