GOod job. I like how it was dark and so much like how some modern girls really feel. Good job.

im glad thers someone who will scream their emotions

all endings arent happy

show the black in this world

that was... beautiful

its really nice to draw from personal experiences to write, its very self-soothing (though most stuff like that that I write doesn't make its way onto

i'm in the mood to write now, i'm inspired, so i'm going to go, but I wanted to let you know that was really great, beautiful

and all boys can be freaking idiots sometimes

this is so sad. i've been through there and i hope you get better.

Wow, there IS some emotion behind that dedication.

From: Guess Who

Wow. That... was... amazing. I've never read a fanfiction that evoked such raw emotion. I can tell that you really put a lot of yourself into this one. Thanks for this beautiful work of art.