WOW, awesome poem. I got chills!

Aww! That was amazing! I loved the ending line!

i love how you throw eclipse into there which is when the whole love triangle thing really heats up between them.

that was reall really really good.i write a poem on new moon wen edward leaves bella myself.but it is nothing like your ,yours is very touching and sweet.it was very cute =)

OMG such a good poem. It's another great poem. Sad but really good.

MARIA!

I LOVE IT
IM WORKING ON ONE TOO
FOR MIKE "VICTUM OF MUCLE SPAZEM" NEWTON

LOL

aw poor jacob

really good

That was SAD! Lol.
You made me feel sorry for Jacob Black.
And I really don't like Jacob! lol.

That was awesome I like it I know I couldn't do something like that. And you really tied in with the charaters instead or writing a whole book or chapter or whatever you really did a good job congradulations! 4 more days til breaking dawn comes out then we'll see what you have to write. You're like way better than I would be.

Sob...i love it.

I love it! The best Twilight poems I've ever read!

heyy.
i like your poems!
are you planning on writing more?
please tell me if you are or not.
cos i have yout story on alert.. and i think that means that it'll tell me if you update it.. but i'm not sure(i just joined this site not 5 minutes ago. haa) so it'd be rly helpful if you could let me know so i know if i should keep this on my alert list or not :)

I like how Edward did it. Nice Job on this one. I hope you planning on writting more. Some happier ones maybe not that she is changed?

I like how they are all sad and all written from different POV's. They are all so sad though. But they speak the truth. Nice job so far.