:D Yay, AkuRoku fluff...

-NX.

Even thogh its just dialouge,i can perfectly imagine what they are doing and what exprissions they wear.Perfect,i like it!
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Very cute...loved it!

I'm giggling like mad now--why couldn't Kingdom Hearts have /that/ in a cut scene?

Ha, ha, ha, ha! I just loved that ending. Keep up the good work, your doing great! Did you write another love story about/with Axel and Roxas in it?
-Fiesta Butterfly.

ow it is so sweet i love it

Well, that was different. It was kinda refreshing, in a way, to read something that's not "in the norm."

It's an interesting idea just to read a story with the dialogue alone, and now that I think about it, it must also be very hard to write. When Axel was shaking, was that a hint at him struggling to contain himself, and not rape Roxas?

Anyways, I couldn't get to the link to watch Gakuen Heaven. It's so annoying that they screen all of the links that you type in. It's so annoying...Oh, and you can watch all of Kaze to Ki no Uta on Youtube. It's been uploaded by a couple of different people, I think.

On a side not, I think it would be interesting to see if you could come up with a fic entirely written as dialogue. Personally, I don't really think it can be done, but it would still be interesting.

Awe~! Or HA~h!

WTF...they are so weird together >.> Its like "Ok...do you guys REALLY like each other??" xD