I really enjoyed reading this story.
Great job. :)

I finally managed to get over here and read some. Great ending!

I just love this story. Its so well done you can see it all happening in your mind. I would love to know how Daniel got into the river and what happens on the trip back. Maybe one day you could update it for us!

I love it. Love it, love it, love it.

nice story!

excellent story. very well written with great characterizations.

That was fantastic. Daniel's disorientation was perfectly described. And the last line was wonderful. So simple, yet it showed Daniel's complete trust in Jack.
As usual, a very nice little story.

Daniel's trust of his friends even through his concussion was well written, as was his confusion over Jack's seemingly contradicting orders. And you got the hypothermia down nicely too. Good job.

nice story. Love the team work and the way Daniel trusts Jack. Hope you update soon.

*pounce*

Heehee! Love it.

:) Cleo

Very, very good story, but it's a shame you stopped it there. :D You could have easily kept going with this one, especially with his memory acting up...