 Lunar Kitty Kat 2009-03-05 . chapter 20I adore strong characterization and strong characters; I adore your fanfiction. It's such a treat to read fanfics that features Kim as such a strong character. So many people focus on making her "atone" for the infamous letter. However, I like that in the Coins series I have been reading (all day!) you kept her true to character. It has always bugged me that on the show they had her character do something so out-of-character as cheat on Tommy, break up with Tommy in a letter, add that "brother" comment, and then send it to Ernie's. It just sets off the bad characterization alarms in my head! Even at a preteen I kept thinking that there must have been more to the letter -- in all the episodes of MMPR Kimberly Hart showed, well heart.
Anyway, I adore finding gems like your stories. You did a great job with The Coins Series and The Alternate. |
 Itachi's aprentice 2008-12-13 . chapter 20This was a great work, I give it a standing ovation. |
 Itachi's aprentice 2008-12-13 . chapter 19Great work. |
 Itachi's aprentice 2008-12-13 . chapter 18Great work. |
 Itachi's aprentice 2008-12-13 . chapter 17Great work. |
 Itachi's aprentice 2008-12-13 . chapter 16Great work. |
 Itachi's aprentice 2008-12-13 . chapter 15Great work. |
 Itachi's aprentice 2008-12-13 . chapter 14This is so original, I love the concept of alternate just as much as I love time-travel. |
 Itachi's aprentice 2008-12-13 . chapter 13as he stared into those wonderful, soft brown eyes, anything and everything seemed possible.
He is so far gone. |
 Itachi's aprentice 2008-12-13 . chapter 12Love, it seemed, was going to ruin them all.
That line was the best. |
 Itachi's aprentice 2008-12-13 . chapter 11Great work, love the awkward teenage faze. |
 Itachi's aprentice 2008-12-12 . chapter 10Great work. |
 Itachi's aprentice 2008-12-12 . chapter 9Great work. |
 Itachi's aprentice 2008-12-12 . chapter 8Great work. |
 Itachi's aprentice 2008-12-12 . chapter 7Great work. |