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Lunar Kitty Kat
2009-03-05 . chapter 20
I adore strong characterization and strong characters; I adore your fanfiction. It's such a treat to read fanfics that features Kim as such a strong character. So many people focus on making her "atone" for the infamous letter. However, I like that in the Coins series I have been reading (all day!) you kept her true to character. It has always bugged me that on the show they had her character do something so out-of-character as cheat on Tommy, break up with Tommy in a letter, add that "brother" comment, and then send it to Ernie's. It just sets off the bad characterization alarms in my head! Even at a preteen I kept thinking that there must have been more to the letter -- in all the episodes of MMPR Kimberly Hart showed, well heart.

Anyway, I adore finding gems like your stories. You did a great job with The Coins Series and The Alternate.
Itachi's aprentice
2008-12-13 . chapter 20
This was a great work, I give it a standing ovation.
Itachi's aprentice
2008-12-13 . chapter 19
Great work.
Itachi's aprentice
2008-12-13 . chapter 18
Great work.
Itachi's aprentice
2008-12-13 . chapter 17
Great work.
Itachi's aprentice
2008-12-13 . chapter 16
Great work.
Itachi's aprentice
2008-12-13 . chapter 15
Great work.
Itachi's aprentice
2008-12-13 . chapter 14
This is so original, I love the concept of alternate just as much as I love time-travel.
Itachi's aprentice
2008-12-13 . chapter 13
as he stared into those wonderful, soft brown eyes, anything and everything seemed possible.

He is so far gone.
Itachi's aprentice
2008-12-13 . chapter 12
Love, it seemed, was going to ruin them all.

That line was the best.
Itachi's aprentice
2008-12-13 . chapter 11
Great work, love the awkward teenage faze.
Itachi's aprentice
2008-12-12 . chapter 10
Great work.
Itachi's aprentice
2008-12-12 . chapter 9
Great work.
Itachi's aprentice
2008-12-12 . chapter 8
Great work.
Itachi's aprentice
2008-12-12 . chapter 7
Great work.
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