AWESOME STORY!! This is deffinetly an alert!!

Who the heck! did Toph marry, and where is he now? anyways good chapter. Update soon please. Like today would be cool.

Paced wonderfully, and the writing is just fantastic, you have some real talent here and the ability to write a good plot! I saw few mistakes (would have to go over with a very fine tooth comb for this!) and I liked the sensible parings of characters and where they are today. Would like to see this continued.

Nocturnus