why didn't soubi say i love you?

This is really well written in the style of the manga and I enjoyed it but I feel like I've been left with the cliff-hanger ending of a work to be continued. There needs to be something more, another chapter or story in this arc.
Thanks Ron

m hot

I'm a little sad that Soubi didn't say "I love you." but at the same time I know it's a good way of keeping things. Also I loved the line about the first real kiss.

And I don't know how you do it but most of the animes that you write to I like too!

Hugs & Kisses & Cookies
Luna Lunak

Nice and angsty. Lovely!!

I lov- I mean I think it is very good!
(oops I almost said the L word)
;)
Cheers
KarlaMarie

so cute!

Aww. I love it.

Aw! I loved it!

This was Lovely! I love how you write, its very good.