Great job. You have Orochimaru down to the last strand.

slightly freaky that was but brilliantly done

This has to be just about the single most perfect Orochimaru fic I've ever read. You've got all four relationships down spot on. Thanks for a great insight into a great character.

Very interesting to read and amazingly well written! ^_^ Heh I loved the last line. Very, very nice work! :D

Woah...nice.

Interesting... I like it
:)

Awesome! ^-^

I liked the last sentence. It was cool!

The last line is absolute win. It's a spot-on piece that is brilliantly written.

Absolutely wonderfully written, each section painted such a believable story.

It got off on a shaky start in my point of view, but once I got into it, I was very pleased. [: Your characterization was spot-on, especially on Kabuto (very nice angle: "If it's what I must do to survive."). There's almost a poetic way to it, and it was a truly lovely read.

That last line made me laugh. But poor Orochimaru. D':

brilliant! ^^

So, so good... Really. It's refreshing to see such a well-written Oro fic.

This is going on my faves.

Cheers for writing it! ^-^

Now if that wasn't satisfying, I don't know what is.

Absoluteley brilliant. You write Oro perfectly~