that was so touching..and so sad it made me want to cry..
but the thing is, i kinda agree with the theme(?) like nothign is forever, even though u want to be for forever ...
this was really nicley written ^^

This story has been on my favorites' list for awhile, so I thought, "Hmm... maybe I should tell the author how much I enjoyed it."
The language is beautiful, which fits the sort of fairytale theme Fai brings. I love the story he tells Sakura, which is made even better by her question at the end, as well as Fai's answer to that question. It's probably my favorite part.
I liked the end, too. Quite solid and a good play between Fai and Kurogane, especially because Kurogane comes across as particularly niave (instead of comforting or assuring) at the end of their conversation.
In short: awesome.

I love Fye, and even thought this fic doesn't take into consideration the latest chapters it's still really cute and a great study of Fye's character.

wow. that was good. it sent chills down my spine for sure.

This was sweet! I like!

DayDreamer

Very nice! I really like your writing style!

I thought that was fascinating. I loved it. I can't exactly explain why, being somewhat lost for words, but I thought you captured all the characters very well and kept this tone of...what, the inevitable? It recalls all Yuuko's blathering about hitsuzen but has this melancholy air to it, and it reminds me a lot of feelings I get from reading Tsubasa itself. Lovely. Kudos.