Beautiful! ^-^

Hm... interesting and deeply disturbing, not to mention tragic. Best part I liked was the scene between Juugo/Sasuke -- this was the tragic part.

Oh, another wonderfully written work. I loved how you discribed Sasuke's views on his fellow teammates. My favorite bit would have to be Karin's mix of emotions at Suigetsu's suggestion. And the ending, so appropriate and a little sad as well.

i love it!!
that last setence was the best thing i've read in months!!\
so awesome
i love team hebi!!
^^

I really do love Suigetsu. He's great, I kinda don't like Karin but it's amazingly rare for me to like any female character so theres nothing new about that. And this fic was just great. Especially the first and the last line. I don't now if the last was true, too, but I like it anyway.

Sasuke's new team creeps me out.

But pairing them all together... that's strange. I like it. Especially since I haven't seen anything about them before.

This is a really fascinating look into the dynamics of Sasuke's new team, and I love the ending. I don't know whether Sasuke's lying or telling the truth, but either way, I love it all the same.

You've brought Suigetsu and Karin to life as their own characters for me -- in the manga, I'm only starting to warm up to Suigetsu, but Karin still seems a bit too proto-Sakura. In here though, I like that they've got their own voices and while there are similarities to Naruto and Sakura, it's mostly in how Sasuke relates to them. Did I mention that I also loved the Sasuke/Suigetsu and Sasuke/Suigetsu/Karin interaction? I find their byplay really fascinating and interesting.