Oh my! Laughed loads. Well done and thanks for sharing

Sometimes, a few lines dragged...

Oh man, I can't believe I actually began a review saying that.

But anyway, I personally consider this thing worth my time for a good chuckle. I don't know how you dodged outright profanity but you certainly made it fun to poke at the sucker's Oedipus complexes. But you did. And it was genuinely amusing.

Some things come to mind as lame, however. For example, you used the easy targets. The villains of certain games, without incorporating a greater degree of interaction or an intelligent solution to the ultimate confrontation meant to take place, is pretty sad. Then again, the whole emphasis is upon the kinky innuendo and suggestions made at the expense of the protagonists. I don't know whether or not it was good for you to slap-dash a conclusion to the big fight. I mean, the part where Quistis regains control over handling Reno is cool, but the three villains-the sole reason they endured that kind of sobering cross-was less than a frilly gag.

Having Laguna arrive at the nick of time just for a few more incriminating jokes just isn't the same without moral indignation from Big Sis Ellone or the intro of the porn-addicted Zone or his whipping boy sidekick Watts. Not to say the script should attempt to incorporate more characters-it has those numbers in spades, and everyone gets their say-but it's just not quite Final Fantasy VI Kink-Fest without tossing in another chick that would get her kicks out of watching these imbeciles suffer!

But these are mostly minor complaints. It's solid and fun to read. Worth a good couple of hours to shut the brain off and just have fun. I think ladies would like it a lot more; the lack of severe detailed battles and a greater emphasis on personal interactions would indicate this. I still had fun, of course. Hope you throw something out whenever you're ticked or bored. Also consider writing dialogue for actuall paying projects.

Oh my I'm glad Winterheart told me about your fic. It's freakin funny. I was laughing so hard my mom called down and asked who I was laughing with, needless to say I got an odd silence when I told her myself. Ehehehehhe, poor Zell. Edea and Selphie are evil and man lol the Rinoa bashing was great. Ha, funny funny. Well done. XD

Mon Dieu, I should not be re-reading this in the computer lab. I burst out laughing and everyone looks over to glance at my screen and then they give a look that says 'psycho American' because they can't understand English. Which is probably a good thing. Putain, I'd forgotten how funny this was...

Oh, we love you too, insane author man! XDDDD Funny, yes disturbingly insane fic! I like it. DO more do more! new fic anyway. They finally noticed the wig XDDD Anyway...if I wasnt scarred for life already that just might do it XDDDD hehehe. Thats good. Ya know? Hehehe. Anyhoo, I think it was good, yet strange. *thwack* I go now. Keep up the strange work!

you a sad sad person. i had to leave my computer 9 time to puke 'cause of your story! but it was funny as hell! just dont write anything like that again.

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OMG! that was hilarious! you can write really really good comedy stories! Keep writing!

I love you! This is soooooo great! -dies laughing- You MUST write some sort of secord part to it!

lmao! I loved it! It was absolutely hilarious!

Heeeeeeeeeeeeee! This is GOOD! I've been following the story for quite a while and I LOVED the twist in the end. Hehe... what goes around comes around, ey Seifer?

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Okay. That's enough. Are you planing making anymore fanfic like this? LOL!

OMG that was hilarious!1 i loved it write another! oooo put Vincent in one he is soo dreamy! and sephy! hehehehee

_ Hehehehehe... I liked it! I can't wait to read more of your humor!

HAAAA HAAA HAAA! I've never read anything so funnie! Whoo hoo! I've had a good laugh, thankz!