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| Hero.Of.The.Hazard 2008-05-29 ch 7, | abuseI really liked this story xD |
| swordbunny4486 2008-02-11 ch 7, | abusenice!! |
| WalkingDisasters 2007-09-21 ch 7, | abuseAw...happy ending! Kinda sad it's over, though... Hope you're well! (Or, at least, getting well soon...) |
| Shire Folk 2007-09-21 ch 7, | abuseAw... it's over. I hoped you could get to the SoraxKairi and RoxasxNamine scenes. Oh well. Excellent as always and I hope you update your other Kingdom Hearts story soon. But I loved how this story went and I'm pretty sure Seifer would be really freaked out as soon as Roxas shows up. Roxas could simply pwn him as I showed. And if you haven't checked out my sneak peak yet, you did want to know what's happening to Roxas so here it goes. The next day from the present day in the last chapter (so Wednesday as the last chapter was Tuesday), Roxas gets knighted by King Mickey. So we have Sir Roxas. May the Grace of the Valar Protect You. -Andrew |
| The Elven-Spear 2007-09-20 ch 7, | abuseHeh. The last two chapters were kinda sappy, but other then that, It's cool. |
| annette 2007-09-20 ch 7, anon. | abuseThe last line of the story was beautiful. I really loved that. I also liked how Riku paid attention to Olette. Poor girl kept trying to get his attention. The best of the chapters. Now make a sequal, ok. |
| KittenDC 2007-09-20 ch 7, | abuseAW! Okay- now that I let that one out XD A great ending to a wonderful story. Per usual your characterizations are great (I really don't think I spelled that one right...) Roxas's conversation with Hayner about Axel was well placed and well writen, In character for both of them. Congrats! I would love a sequal though... - The Brunette Bookworm |
| Kari Minamoto 2007-09-07 ch 6, | abuseI loved this chapter. It was really well down with the characters behaving as they really might. Roxas' thoughts throughout the piece was a nice touch too. Hope you finish it soon! ~Kari Minamoto |
| The Elven-Spear 2007-09-07 ch 6, | abuseWhoa, cool. |
| Shire Folk 2007-09-07 ch 6, | abuseOnce again, an awesome chapter. I laughed really hard when Roxas and Kairi were having that little private conversation, and then was grinning like an idiot while Kairi was telling Sora that he would always be with her. But I was hoping that Sora wouldn't be clueless enough to figure it out. Even him smiling as he understood who would have been good enough. Ah well. I'm writing this at school in my Financial Management class so I'll have to cut it off here though. But Hayner [i]finally[/i] letting Roxas in was the best part. May the Grace of the Valar Protect You. |
| WalkingDisasters 2007-09-06 ch 6, | abuseAww, that's cute. But, I think my favorite parts were when Kairi told Roxas to take his own advice, and the "Welcome back, old friend." part. ^^ Only one more to go? This is definitely on my favorite list. |
| annette 2007-09-06 ch 6, anon. | abuseThe best part was the ending of this chapter, " Welcome Back Old Friend". I really liked that whole part. Best chapter yet! Can't wait for the next chapter! Or i mean the last chapter! I still think the story should be longer. :D |
| Shire Folk 2007-08-14 ch 5, | abuseI'm sorry I didn't review until now, but I didn't get a chance to read much for the three weeks I was gone. But now that I'm back, chapters will start being cranked out and I can review. I loved Olette's ghost comment, and I also loved this chapter. But I am truly concerned at how the gang will take the news, since they just learned what Nobodies were. May the Grace of the valar Protect You. |
| SupernaturalFreak101 2007-08-10 ch 5, | abuseAww, so cute. I love how Roxas and Sora can talk together and hear each others thoughts. I am so glad that Hayner remebered Roxas' name. I wonder how they are going to react to the fast that Roxas is a nobody?? Can't wait to find out. Please update soon!! |
| WalkingDisasters 2007-08-09 ch 5, | abuseYay! They remember! And Namine appears too! ^^ Haha. But I hope that the reaction in the next chapter isn't too big...well, I can sorta imagine their jaws literally hitting the ground...eh. |